Item: THE CURSE AND THE SUCCUBUS SYSTEM
Rating: 3.2

Hack_You_7972Lv23mth

2024-07-29 01:04

Writing quality is good, story development in this early stage is pretty good as well. Character design, updating stability and world background is NOT satisfactory!!

THE CURSE AND THE SUCCUBUS SYSTEM

Ayush_Jaiswal_3105

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actually my exam start recently and so i couldn't get so much attention to updating story like past but soon I will focus into this don't worry

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