Hack_You_7972

Very good. More chapters please...........

Writing quality is extremely terrible with lots of grammatical errors. It is confusing to understand sentences properly.

Our protagonist is SEMI-NTR'd....

I hope the author will not remove this negative review if he has guts....

Read around 130 chapters or so. So, Rose shelly the female lead has an ex and around 100th chapter that ex captured our mc and made affectionate moves with her.... This mc is already NTR'd if not SEMI-NTR'd due to the female lead having an ex .... Also, I noticed the entire time I read, the novel gives the feeling that our weak protagonist is 'about to be ntr'd' Sigh. So much for our the author promising that there will be ntr..... Also, this is just my preference but this is novel so please refrain from using poetic style narration. It feels artificial and fails to keep the reader in 'immersion' though I would not prefer to immerse too deeply considering none of the female lead were 'clean' before their interaction with mc....

Yes. The novel deserves 5 star. I like how author helps the reader to immerse themselves in the plot or any situation, and also I know how challenging it is write a harem genre with yanderes. Unlike other novel, this one actually portrays the girls yandere tendencies in detail - which is another plus. Anyways, I hope the author will not drop this in middle like other novel. Keep up the good work and good luck.

Writing quality is good, story development in this early stage is pretty good as well. Character design, updating stability and world background is satisfactory..

This novel have too much info dump.

Writing quality is good, story development in this early stage is pretty good as well. Character design, updating stability and world background is NOT satisfactory!!

But evora is hot....