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2024-10-30 23:57

SPOILER, ESCREVENDO AQUI PARA AVISAR OQUE ME INCOMODOU NA HISTÓRIA PARA CASO VC TENHA O MESMO PROBLEMA Bom, quando percebi que não ia ser harém, confesso que deu uma desanimada, ainda mais quando ele fazia todas personagens acharem MC lindo e blá blá blá, mas o relacionamento com a Ramona tava bem desenvolvido e gostoso de ver... Agora, aceitar que não vai ter harém eu aceitei, fazer outros personagens se relacionar, por mais que me doa, aceitei, AGORA descrever uma cena de sexo com a Kin e o Scott com certeza me pegou, sério cara, não entendo pq fazer essa cena, faz eles namorar e pronto, é necessário escrever essa merda? Enfim, fiquei MT puto e ainda fico quando lembro dessa cena, abandonei a história aqui

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Well I'm not exactly going with a plan in my mind and also that s*x scene between Kim and Scott was too short, I don't know why that annoyed you and MC have a good personality and he is good looking and have money and power and also a girlfriend so of course other will find him attractive that is natural. If this was harem I wouldn't make it brainless so we would reach the second female lead in chapter one hundred and that is to long so it's better this be with just one female lead. I understand what is bothering you and I really don't have anything to say except thanks for reading till now, at least your reason for abandoning this makes sense while some just give bad ratings to this fanfic because MC isn't op in chapter 25

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Kkk obrigado por entender, acho que o problema é pessoal e nem sei o motivo de ficar tão puto mesmo a cena sendo curta, acho que o fato de eles terem quebrado a cama me pegou mais kkkkk, acho que sempre que leio me ponho no lugar/identifico com MC, então lendo outros fazendo isso e com essa descrição não foi do meu agrado, mas entendo seu pensamento também

Alucard_7894:Well I'm not exactly going with a plan in my mind and also that s*x scene between Kim and Scott was too short, I don't know why that annoyed you and MC have a good personality and he is good looking and have money and power and also a girlfriend so of course other will find him attractive that is natural. If this was harem I wouldn't make it brainless so we would reach the second female lead in chapter one hundred and that is to long so it's better this be with just one female lead. I understand what is bothering you and I really don't have anything to say except thanks for reading till now, at least your reason for abandoning this makes sense while some just give bad ratings to this fanfic because MC isn't op in chapter 25
Alucard_7894
Alucard_7894作者

It's okay, you should know MC have no interest in Kim, absolutely no interest, also about the bed breaking is just because they are not used to their new strength like how MC and Ramona destroyed a hot spring which is much harder to destroy than a bed.

DIAGO:Kkk obrigado por entender, acho que o problema é pessoal e nem sei o motivo de ficar tão puto mesmo a cena sendo curta, acho que o fato de eles terem quebrado a cama me pegou mais kkkkk, acho que sempre que leio me ponho no lugar/identifico com MC, então lendo outros fazendo isso e com essa descrição não foi do meu agrado, mas entendo seu pensamento também
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