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also I understand this fanfic is good and won't do anything like love at first sight. I'm mean the relationship between MC and the Alicent have been developed so yeah i understand there won't be something like love at first sight.

hehe, almost all fanfic MC are oc and i didn't say i don't like oc. also what do mean female lead can be either? the female lead isn't Alicent ?( i know I wrote her name wrong) also what do mean you aren't trying to force thing? I'm sure I didn't wrote you force things.

Man the story is amazing. Also it's Good to know the timeline. You gave MC this girl Alicent( I didn't read her name right) I just hope you don't make a her excuse and a weakness for MC, like her getting kidnapped or something worse. Also I'm not a fan of oc female lead love interest, I'm mean in a fanfic you chose someone you know ( I'm mean you author, not the MC) and if you want a oc female lead then just make a original story but it's really okay because the romance is not the focus of the story. Also that man was clearly not destined to possess MC body, come on, if a god wanted that to happen then it would happen and there was nothing that MC could do.

Thanks for the chapter. Also who Is the love interest?

Some X-Men turned into criminals, damn this is a really mess up au also this three spider are Gwen and Peter and miles morales? Or all three of them are spider woman? Also fit how to make your fight better, well maybe explain their moves better. If I was you I would make a one Vs one fight first then moves on and makes a group fight but this wasn't bad

Thanks for the chapter. I have some questions. We read that instead of ruby mother, her father is the one that disappeared(died) so he was the one with gray eyes? Also like the series there is two mother and I this world men are like women and women are like men so did that man cheat on both of them? or first he was with one of them and then with another one? Also I read a comment that said said make Yang try and blackmail MC and I like it. Also it would be good if MC finally went to ruby house and meet her mother and then he could sleep with rose, and make the same thing that happened with Yang. Also for the future, when MC becomes stronger and start his fight with grimm or maybe he could be caught by the queen Grimm and the queen Grimm and you know the rest,( honestly it's seem easier to just find her a husband to save the world) again I never saw RWBY and all i know are from fanfics. Also it would be good if MC finally see wenehe or whatever the white haired woman name is, the one he had a hate s*x and make him pretend to be angry at him because she didn't call.

Also thanks for your comment, it's good to know that more than one person read this fanfic.

I don't know, is there a lot of people talking about their fanfic on YouTube? Also thanks for your comment, it's good to know more people read this fanfic

ah grammar, my eternal enemy. I really should do a re read on the chapters and fix their mistake, sorry man. Honestly this whole fanfic start without I knowing what I want to do, I'm mean I didn't even know what kind of system I want and as you know nothing in this fanfic is really planned. Also for my next fanfic I won't rush and take my time to try to actually create a planned story. Also the reason why the MC is young is not because of training arc and also there would be a real training arc but the real reason for MC young age is because the main characters of that universe are also 13 and then later 14. I know the main characters are so young and an old man with a reason give those powers to them, well to them, not the MC, and if in they could fight when they are only 13 then MC could also do it. I don't know if you know the show, it's name is ' miraculous, tales of ladybug and cat noir' or something like that. I'm still not sure about the MC powers but this time I decided to go without a system and like this fanfic it would have only one female lead. Also I think a 18 years old person is so awkward to date 13 or 14 years old person even if he became 14 again so I will make MC younger but he will still be more reasonable than the people in that world because the people in that world are not so, well you get what I'm mean right? Also the transmigration need a reason, so I will go with the classic reason, the R.O.B and like this fanfic the R.O.B won't ask MC if he wants to transmigration into another world or not. I'm still not sure about the powers, do you have any ideas?

yeah, I'm thinking to make MC a 13 or 14 years old person instead of a 18 years old person