The novel is really good but the only issue i have is that the author tends to "rant" a lot, especially in the world explanation and in filler chapters. It kinda kills the already built-up momentum like in the train ride where the MC and the officers just yap continuously for like 3-4 chapters. it might seem like you're giving details and more depth in the novel but it's more like embellishing unimportant parts of the novel. Overall i love the novel and it really has potential. These are just my takes😊
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