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Ngl i thought it was just those copy & paste novels but nope this is much different and i like it very much. And i like that the mc behave like a child would behave. He feels real and emotionally And f**k the mother why would u do that to ur own child ps( i like that development though ) I like when the mc started going bullistic on his father just reading it u feel the mc's emotions , they where the emotions of a child. I give props for that U best not drop this author because you are on casp of makig a masterpiece here. Anyway good luck on the book hope to see more of that pls.

The first 20-30 chapters are ok but it starts eating away on your brain cells any later. The author probably has ADHD. Going off topic too add 3 unnecessary paragraphs to every paragraph. One single arc took about 30 chapters starting from chapter 20 and as i see it from the titles, it is gonna go on for a lot more. The writing style is annoying. Info dumps every now and then. It would be more practical to introduce new things when they are actually needed. Forinters or whatever were not needed here right now so it was pointless. The Academy introduction was pointless unless he went there or met someone from there. The plot is forced with the mother, the system shutting down and that Mary Woman in train station (you cant just kill a guy holding Royalty ID just cuz u suspect him, run a dna test, check account balance and confirm of he deserves to be royalty before fkin around). Anyway this was my review. This book got potential. Edit and change. Thats how it works. Imma drop it. Do let me know if it changes. Ill give it a read then. Thanks

I like the story, it's entertaining. my problem is is the author continues to list stats that are pointless. nothing has changed. the character hasn't moved forward in their status and yet they'll list stats every chapter or twice in a chapter I've seen.

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Well it's my book so I am going to Five Star it😁

thats it im sick of these very slow paced novels imagine the train scene alone almost 20chapters????for gods sake be more creative!i stopped reading this novel now...good plot but very very slow pace

1. Grammatical errors to hell and back 2. Unnecessary dialogue where the author tries to be "funny" and "relatable", but it just comes off as forceful and weird. Literally one of the earlier 20 something chapters mentioned the MC's worry about him getting shotacon gangraped 3. Despite being a 20 something grown man, the MC is childish, immature, and his stupidity has gotten him into avoidable situations more than once