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Garry_Pal
Garry_PalLv129mth
2024-02-10 00:21

annoying your writing style is annoying get back to realty buddy we are not on poetic Competition that you write every thing in poetic manner its annoying to read i am droping this good luck hope you improve in your next novel

The Author’s Paradox

Superfabinho
4.4
64 Chs

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Superfabinho
SuperfabinhoAuthor

Ouch, that hurt. Did I offend you by accident, buddy? Forgive me, please? I know that my writing is not that great, but I’m trying to improve. I changed a lot of things in the last chapters, made it easier to understand and more lively. Thanks for the constructive criticism!!!

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Garry_Pal
Garry_PalLv12

na buddy it is just when i reading your novel it annoys me that you describe a simple task in a most poetic manner which is Unnecessary. that make me drop your novel in 7 ch

Superfabinho:Ouch, that hurt. Did I offend you by accident, buddy? Forgive me, please? I know that my writing is not that great, but I’m trying to improve. I changed a lot of things in the last chapters, made it easier to understand and more lively. Thanks for the constructive criticism!!!
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Superfabinho
SuperfabinhoAuthor

well, this is my writing

Garry_Pal:na buddy it is just when i reading your novel it annoys me that you describe a simple task in a most poetic manner which is Unnecessary. that make me drop your novel in 7 ch
9mth
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Iguessitsok
IguessitsokLv4

Don’t listen to him your writing is beautiful.

Superfabinho:well, this is my writing
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Superfabinho
SuperfabinhoAuthor

Iguessitsok:Don’t listen to him your writing is beautiful.
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Myrtle_S
Myrtle_SLv1

Don't mind it, people have their own writing style, it's okay so long as the reader understands what you're conveying easily

Superfabinho:Ouch, that hurt. Did I offend you by accident, buddy? Forgive me, please? I know that my writing is not that great, but I’m trying to improve. I changed a lot of things in the last chapters, made it easier to understand and more lively. Thanks for the constructive criticism!!!
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Veris_
Veris_Lv13

I’m gonna try your novel for the sole reason that you keep using dean winchester gifs and i love u for it.

Superfabinho:well, this is my writing
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Superfabinho
SuperfabinhoAuthor

Veris_:I’m gonna try your novel for the sole reason that you keep using dean winchester gifs and i love u for it.
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