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ZaHagag
ZaHagagLv41yr
2024-03-21 09:49

I really enjoyed reading the first 40 ish chapters of the novel, however for me it went downhill right after the festival. The writing quality is unique and provides a comedic element to the story, I can’t really comment on the updating stability as I binged read it so 5 stars. The story development was going quite well I see that the author was inspired by TAPOV and JJK and it was all going great before that high court inclusion into the story, as we haven’t really spent that much time in the academy and only explored like 1 or 2 dungeons. Next up is character design now this is the most disappointing aspect so far as it held the most potential, everything was going perfect until his match with Noah ( rank C ) all of a sudden it felt he had a personality change with nothing leading up to it. The side characters are pretty decently written and get their own share of screen time. The World background from what I remember is the academy, the high counsel and tournament arena, I don’t really focus much on it while reading. Keep up the good work

The Author’s Paradox

Superfabinho
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Superfabinho
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I'm literally a newbie in this area. But I'll do my best to make it work. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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AlfDeT_Valedstorm
AlfDeT_ValedstormLv14

Come and read The Shakespeare's Fan's transmigration in his own novel. And plz try to read till chap 20 then there is 95% chance that u will be hooked with this novel. I tried and didn't read at first but finally when the enemy of humankind - boredom came over me i decided to give this work a chance and now i am absolutely loving this work. (Hey Author-san don't get conceited okay.)

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SUNLESSSSS
SUNLESSSSSLv14

We got an amazing story here folks.... And the mc is a complete banger.... I really like those mysterious and carefree mc, which is very hard to find in today's novels.... A good progression and amazing writing which really did gave me a good laugh as well.... I really do hope no one miss out on this masterpiece...

1yr
Garry_Pal
Garry_PalLv12

annoying your writing style is annoying get back to realty buddy we are not on poetic Competition that you write every thing in poetic manner its annoying to read i am droping this good luck hope you improve in your next novel

1yr
Heroic_Empowerment
Heroic_EmpowermentLv14

As far as I have read the novel is really good the progression of the story is also going well and it’s interesting MC is also interesting and funny only real thing I would complain about is the fact that authors vocabulary may be too advanced for the average reader but if not for that everything is perfect nice novel has allot of potential [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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lockhart2009
lockhart2009Lv2

Not hating and I've only read the first chapter. Is this AI writing? The description is very similar to The Author's POV so I wondered if it is.

1yr
Dries186
Dries186Lv4

Bro taught his english teacher how to english.

1yr
Caeruleumm
CaeruleummLv12

Honestly, this novel has surprised me, the MC has his humor that is very good, the author's vocabulary is very good and the little mystery that the MC has is good, also the descriptions, fights and secondary characters are very well done. In summary, it is a good work with potential, Author, if you continue uploading 1 cap per day or more, you will definitely do well.

1yr
3ddy
3ddyLv4

the novel itself is at the beginning so i can't give a detailed review but some key things about it are the writing style which is unique and similar to the old books I'm forced to read for school, now this unique writing style is something i like but i think most people will dislike it it's a hit or miss, there are not many evident at least grammatical errors but the conversations between characters feels strange and stiff( it's a weird feeling which I'm not knowledgeable enough to explain) .Anyway the overall novel is pretty good but it's going to be a hit or miss for most people

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