A Self Insert FF as a Krillin,? i will give it a chance, as my thanks Android:18.

First of all don’t disrespect ma boy krillin since at least he’s the strongest human and second of all great starting and hopefully there will be more

Not a great fic, but a good fic to pass time. The wishes just don't make sense tho, and they are overused. Also the story starts after picollo arc, not king picolo. Besides that the bigest minus for me is that mc didn't wish to be taller and look like a normal human at least.

Meh. It's not that good. I left it at 11. I'll probably come back if I don't have anything to read. But it's not a big deal. A stupid MC and etc. You know what they say, if a story doesn't grab you from the beginning, then it's bad, because if no one reads it because it's boring at that moment... Who could disagree with you? The only reason I'm coming back is because it's a DBZ fanfic. This is more of a fanservis and a biography of the reincarnated Krillin. 'i did this and that, goku did this and that, if he had done this and that, probably this and that' you get the point.

As of chapter 30, I’m loving the fanfic. The first chapter is very stupid, the mc chooses to be reborn as a bald dwarf with no nose, and has terrible reasons for not choosing another character to be reborn as. He also chooses to be reborn at the end of og dragonball, instead of the start of db, which would give him more of a headstart. But after the first chapter, I loved the entire story until i got caught up. The first chapter is the only annoying part, and the rest of the story is fire, and also has a few dbza elements like abridged popo, or them seeing fake namek, or recoome’s WWE lines. Doesnt interfere with the story, but adds comedy. Great fanfic overall, please don’t drop.

read up to chapter 11 at time of review. I like it. I feel like it is a fresh spin on the dragon ball story so far. There is proper communication between the characters. The author is doing a good job at not making it feel dry. The grammar is decent, a small mistake here and there but nothing glaring. All in all I like it and can't wait for more chapters to be released. Thank you author, and keep up the good work.

I will be brutally honest. This is shit, Krillin meat rides Goku for most of the story and he is more busy creaming his pants for the main cast to actually have personality. His entire personality is that he is just a fix-it mc. Author makes any excuse to tweak the main rules of dragon ball, for example when he introduced Super Saiyan he proceeded to nerf it because of “Later power scaling”. Honestly this shit is just hard to enjoy when it’s mostly about how Krillin likes to help others then given himself much needed power ups.

To be honest, I've always enjoyed reading fanfictions based on non-cannon, such as fanfics of fanfics. And it's not only because such authors usually place in decent effort in their writing while thinking somewhat logically, but that popular abridged works are appealing spin-offs that wouldn't be remembered otherwise. For example, I feel I remember the abridged DBZ better than the plots of some animes that I haven't watched decades ago. Don't get me wrong, some abridged animes were just memeing because the fansub wasn't officially out yet, such as Akikan, iirc, it was just bad, because the creator didn't actually know what was being said and made an abridged sub instead?

I haven't come across to many krillan stories. This story has been great so far. I can't wait to read more......................................................

[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]