Less lemon (possible none) more action and you are my man or else...

THIS FANFIC HINTS AT MAJOR JJK SPOILERS SO READ AT YOUR OWN RISK, FOR THOSE THAT CHOOSE TO CONTINUE, AS SOMEONE WHO REALLY LIKES THIS, PLEASE GIVE YOUR DAILY POWERSTONES TO THIS FANFIC BECAUSE THE AUTHOR SAID THEY'D CONTINUE DEPENDING ON READER RESPONSE. Writing Quality - 4*: Author has a very charming writing style that's done in a way that's very palatable for a general audience, only complaint I have are the small typo's you'll see periodically, they won't break your immersion or anything but they still exist so I can't give it a 5* for this category. Stability of Updates - 5*: As of making this review all the chapters were released on the same day, and only a day ago. This is sort of only a placeholder rating as I have no data to base it off of. Story Development - 5*: I like where it's going right now, though I do hope the MC doesn't become genuinely untouchable otherwise the story will lose all it's tension and just become a flexing contest for every fight the MC gets in to. Gojo's charm as a character in JJK was only possible because he wasn't the be-all end-all solution to every problem, and with enough hax he is beatable. (Toji's spear that nullifies cursed techniques, the Prison Realm used to seal him, Takaba's "Comedian", and (spoilers) Mahoraga that Sukuna used to learn how to bypass Infinity) Character Design - 5*: The MC has a really fun personality, I wouldn't say it's exactly Gojo but he at least has Gojo's sass and doesn't come off corny either which is such a breath of fresh air (some author's don't know how to write good one-liners and taunts for their MC's, but not the author of this story.) There hasn't been much of side-characters to make an opinion of them. World Background - 5*: No complaints here, the author gives the readers an omniscient view of the story that the MC doesn't have (i.e following other character's POV's, getting clues through dialogue that the MC doesn't pick up on but we do) which leads to a very immersive story and a world that feels 'alive'.

FOR THOSE WHO ARE GOING TO READ THIS FIC. IT'S A GREAT WAY TO PASS TIME IF YOU ARE LOOKING FOR A FUN DC FANFIC. ALTHOUGH THERE CAN STILL BE IMPROVEMENTS LIKE PROBABLY ADDING A 3RD POV ABOUT HOW OTHER PEOPLE REACT TO HIM. ALL IN ALL, IT IS INTERESTINGLY GOOD SO FAR.

Simplistic story, + first person, + excessive describing everything, + hard to read and take seriously. Mc is ordinary student that has the body of gojo and acts very smug. He keeps thinking random stuff all the time like any of it matters, bad friendship no build up, and young masters I mean thugs show up out of nowhere to attack him so that Mc can reveal his powers. Mc says he can't and won't beat criminals cause they have plot armor, so then what is he doing? Lots of details of how his room looks and about infinity but no development, no meaning and reason why is Mc doing anything or what he's aiming for in the future.

you like to read a story where the protagonist will not kill his opponents or witnesses to his abilities, then you should read this story because here the protagonist will not kill the opponent even if this opponent raped his acquaintance........

MC has much more power than gojo but gets destroyed in every fight by ordinary humans. The author's excuse is that he doesn't want to use curse energy and wants to learn martial arts. The author does not know what learning means. MC gets one shotted every time.

The story is good and the only problem i have is the decision the main character is making so far. I’ll update this review as the story goes along and i manage to read more.

The mc is so powerful, yet he is getting pummeled by weak people. The excuse is that he is training himself to fight without his powers. This mc leaves me speechless🤣💀.......................................

I was expecting more when i saw an MC with gojo satoru abilities, but this...seriously this is a big disappointement for me as a GOJO fan 😑

Absolutely amazing price of work. This is goat approved.