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Aurora_Drakon
Aurora_Drakon作者10mth
2023-12-25 05:55

This review is here for any questions you all have for me.

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Yajin3004
Yajin3004Lv3

Harem?

That_Annoying_guy
That_Annoying_guyLv4

is this a harem or no harem?

36_Hours
36_HoursLv15

He’s a dad probably not a harem..

GeneralDeFartos_L
GeneralDeFartos_LLv4

Please no harem, faithful mc is best. i don't mind him having supreme dad mindset and treating all girls as daughters, just no harem please.

CerberusX
CerberusXLv15

I like harem but I'd settle for just some romance

Zed1_Eren_
Zed1_Eren_Lv4

I like Harem but it would be better if it's one night stand thing cuz it's apocalypse

Uskalski_Yuchiha
Uskalski_YuchihaLv3

trash, it's a father not a deadbeat

Zed1_Eren_:I like Harem but it would be better if it's one night stand thing cuz it's apocalypse
Uskalski_Yuchiha
Uskalski_YuchihaLv3

author, what does the wife, daughter, and son look like?

cluelessauthor
cluelessauthorLv15

is the mc's name pronounced, ma-la-chi or ma-la-kai?

theking_901
theking_901Lv13

What is the MCs power. I don't wanna invest FP if he doesn't actually get stronger or if it takes hundreds of chapters for his ability to become useful.

Vishrut_Jaiswal
Vishrut_JaiswalLv12

author should atleast answer questions

RyuSenju
RyuSenjuLv13

bro doesn't even answer any of the questions in here😂

GBWJN
GBWJNLv15

Why author ask reader every chapter for comment And you use such a long paragraph In a chapter of 9 there are 3 pages that you ask !!!!!! And often repeat chapter to make it long to get more coin more money I steop reading this !!!!!

GingaNinja_AniLog
GingaNinja_AniLogLv14

are you ever going to fix 193 on?

Sim_Um
Sim_UmLv14

You put the review for questions. But where is the answers?

Mystr
MystrLv15

I was just about to ask!!

Sim_Um:You put the review for questions. But where is the answers?
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Mystr
MystrLv15

I was about to read this. but, the lack of responses on a comment established for the purpose of answering questions is a red flag for me

Other Reviews
Yunsildin
YunsildinLv15

Okay I’ve read up to current update that doesn’t require privileges. Writing quality is very good and starts really strong. Little to no grammatical or spelling errors. The beginning gives you that good apocalypse vibe. The only major thing I’ll nit pick is later the author puts really large notes of thanks and requests comments at the end of every chapter. This feels more like padding the chapters word count than anything to me since it’s the same exact words every single time. The story updates consistently. There has been very little pauses in at least one daily update. Story development has been very good. In fact has been the best thing about this story. I could not tell you what our main character actually looks like and his family. I can, however, say I love the family dynamic and how they interact with eachother. They’re in this facing zombie apocalypse together. I will say that I feel some eastern fantasy vibes also occurring in the story. So far we still have that tense apocalypse feel but for how long I don’t know. As I’ve mention character design is definitely lacking. I have kind pasted my own ideas of what the characters look like based on their shown personality. World background starts in basically our world so it’s not a hard thing to start with. Now the changes to the world by the apocalypse does get mentioned consistently so the world is changing and is being rebuilt as the story progresses. Part of the fun of reading apocalypse stories. So far so good. It’s a good and enjoyable read. I definitely would give it a try if you enjoy a zombie apocalypse with eastern fantasy fused into it. Also for this who I know will ask, there is NO harem here. Just a good married man with kids and a lot of gumption to survive a horde of zombies.😉

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