The start seems promising. it's rare to see a dragon mc overlord fanfic and since dragons are my favourite I have great expectations. since mc will be the strongest player unlike ainz who was one of the top players don't make him much of a schemer like ainz, use brute force. Also get the girls and do the things our bone daddy couldn't do because of his bone body. all the best. DONT DROP.

many grammatical error, quite a bit of inconsistency and all around not a pleasant read. i wish the author good luck in their future endeavors

A really great overlord fanfic I Hope this story get completed and continue please don't author its rare nowadays to findgreat overlord fanfic in ongoing

I'm late with this review, I'm doing this sincerely, I don't want to diminish or offend anyone. let's go . The story addresses a player character who is the strongest from the beginning, has some holes but is well done, maintains the proposed standard without many personality variations (he was supposed to be evil but is nice or something, that doesn't happen). The case of approaching a dragon character is interesting because in the OC it was something frustrating to see and here we have the opportunity for a new development that is perhaps more interesting. the scenario hasn't been explored much yet, but we're still at the beginning of the story, -100 chapters, basically we have a completely authorial scenario and that excites me a lot... The writing is a weak point in the story, the quality has been improving with new chapters, but we still have some problems. The dialogues and fights are tiring and slow, we managed to skip the whole event and we won't miss much, this in my opinion is a big problem. recently in the last chapters I see a lot of description about smoking, if it were only a few times that would be fine, but it is already in a quantity that is starting to bother, is it really necessary to have one or two paragraphs describing the plant you are smoking? The main positive point is the author, I really liked him! He was very attentive to his readers, responded to our comments and was always open to opinions and suggestions, this makes me really happy and motivates me to continue following his work…. Thank you for your work, I hope to see you growing even more!!

The only and biggest problem is that there is Andrew tate in this fic. And my brain cannot handle him calling mc "Top G" like a fan girl.

Hello, how are you? Thank you very much for the topic. More chapters, come on. More chapters, come on

Everything sounds like a wet dream of the author, even having the same name, the quality is mid compared to other overlord fics but its still abit better than MTL

Thank you very much, finaly Overlord FF who has both Lemons and regular updates,

Writing quality is kinda mid compared to some novels. Many spelling mistakes. Plot and way author writes is good but the spelling is kinda holding it back a little. Overall a good novel to read