The story have a lot of potential it's all depends of the author. The characters specialy the mc have funny personalitie. the original mc its kinda annoying (this is my point of view from personalitie) and how i imagen the mc Lucas

I feel like the author writes this story more on a whim, without much coherent thought behind it. It feels like he just tosses a bunch of information at you at the start of the novel, and then goes off and writes random plot twists dependent on his mood. Characters just perform actions outside of their explained personality, which personally i don't consider character development,character derailment maybe. Way too much time is also spent on random scuffles not really relevant to the story, being labelled as main scenarios, but could honestly be reduced to a chapter or 2 and nothing would change. I think the more egregious thing however is the author biting off more than he can chew. He spends several chapters building up this world based on a potentially predetermined story, and without the readers even knowing much about it, he sets about changing everything. I frankly don't understand setting up this world around certain characters to just add more supposedly, spicing up the novel however I just find it confusing. It's similar to wearing a full suit then just putting on a pair of pink underwear over it for flare, unnecessary. I think trying to add surprising elements to the Mc's background is ok, however shoving it into your face 20 chapters in is just so jarring and such an uncomfortable upset to the pace of the story. It's like if you're reading a novel about killing the demon king, then you spent 20 chapters on stopping some bullying not relevant, 30 chapters on a dungeon that could be 5, meaningless character interactions yes please give me 25, now why don't we make the mc's family secretly demon worshipers and the female lead's family a group of anthropomorphic hamsters, oh wait what was the main goal again, the demon king? The novel is now 100+ chapters and the author is getting tired, demon king is too far away and the hamster arc still needs to be solved, gg go next. If you don't have 600 chapters worth of effort and time to put into a novel, please don't write it as such with so many plot twists and turns before you've even properly started on the main path. Sorry bit of a rant at the end but thanks for reading, even this review could be shorter lol.

Shameless Author is here!After 65 chapters I'm finally going to review my novel. It's been a long journey for me guys. Anyway, I know that many people are dissatisfied with the old chapter. So I'm going to edit all of them, I can't edit all of them at the same time but I will edit one or two chapters a day.So please support Guys in this novel.And if you want you can send gifts to me, I mean I didn't receive any gifts from my dear viewers, so if you like you can send gifts.And if you have any questions you can ask me here. Of course, I'm not going to be spoiled anything. So, bye-bye for now.

MC with the name Lucas and a transmigration to an extra character novel.

It blatantly copies many situations from TAPOV, I will kill the author, and Shadow Slave. Almost copy and paste. Maybe some paraphrasing and name changes however it’s very obvious.

okay I read all the free chapters and based on what I have read this novel is mostly a copy of famous novels like I will kill the author, author pov etc. like 90% of the novel is copy of I will kill the author with character names changed. also this makes it more plausible by reading the titles that I am also sure that it is the same later down the line so no way am I going to waste my fast passes on this novel

After reading it, I felt like there was nothing new at all. Many of the plot points are inspired by other novels, which makes the novel lack personality.

Your writing quality is good, There are some grammar mistakes but I know that it will improve as time goes on.I hope that you will continue to write this novel

This has great potential keep it up author.