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Kary_KD
Kary_KDLv139mth
2024-01-19 17:27

I wanted to give this a 4.3 or even 4.4 but after the time skip it felt like we had missed so much more than we should have from the story. I hope AN would incorporate it in between but time skips for training are fine but gaining new powers that you got from the girls you have conquered feels like we missed a lot, because if i had to choose btw a arc where we get to know about his adventure and what happen in 2 years his fights with different kind of monsters and people, than the teenager drama and bickering with kids, I would choose the 2 year one and slice of life after( just my opinion) this is just me nitpicking stuff that I found annoying. But overall the story is very interesting with time-space availability. I hope the author updates it more regularly because it has a good plot and a storyline 👏.

Saga of Atlantis

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Hello there! I am the author of this book, and it is my first novel, so please forgive my mistakes . If you notice any, please notify me so that I may correct them as quickly as possible.With that done, let's talk about our MC:1. He will be overpowered, but only at the same level. Anyone with a higher tier than him can defeat him. He analyzes before acting, and he will not put himself in danger if he does not know how to get out of it.2. For the first few arcs, he will behave as any other human would after living years in a post-apocalyptic world. He will be cold and calculate whose vision of good and bad is blurred out.3. If you have any queries concerning the harem, please ask them and I will respond. and I'll do my best to make the harem as reasonable and logical as possible. (You know, the one where one heroine tries to kill another in order to have the MC all to herself.)I welcome any criticism, so please express your thoughts, and I will take them into account in order to make my story worth your time.

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