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RiLi88
RiLi88Lv111yr
2023-10-21 20:11

I have deleted my previous review since i dont think he is a SIMP for now...I like the story and the Author delivered it quite well... Things i dont like and the reason i dont give a full 5 stars...the system still a bit annoying coz she keeps interupting the MC quite often...the pace is really slow and the MC still 13 till 55 chaps which is the latest chapter now...because he is still 13 he keeps getting a head pat (twice if i am not wrong) though he is mentally adult(Reason why i hate child MC) He should be more cunning and act like Villain(not the psycho type Villain) and the Author should pick up the pace a little bit... Other than that, this Novel is good and I truly recommend people to give it a shot and read it....

Saga of Atlantis

Noob6_writer9
4.2
209 Chs

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Noob6_writer9
Noob6_writer9Author

Thanks for the review.

1yr
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Cliffhanger_Mdfaka
Cliffhanger_MdfakaLv4

what chapter did the sypnosis come from? I just want to make sure my points are worth spending, for the taste of revenge that is

1yr
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Cliffhanger_Mdfaka
Cliffhanger_MdfakaLv4

Nevermind I understand it now

1yr
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DryImagination
DryImaginationLv4

you're welcome

Noob6_writer9:Thanks for the review.
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1yr
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Alanray64
Alanray64Lv15

Child MC and long time to grow is offputting

1yr
1
Original_Eternal
Original_EternalLv1

what's wrong with head pat head pats are nice

5mth
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