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Version_401Author1yr
2023-06-29 03:12

An easy way to cheese a 5-star review and increase your average rank! I'll take it! Plus I'll take this opportunity to tell you a bit more about this story. So what can you expect from the story? Harem!!!! Nope [img=faceslap] MC possibly not losing most fights? Yes, while he isn't OP in the beginning he will quickly become OP, at least when compared to his peers, if you want him to fight Itachi and Orochimaru after 1 and a half years, then probably not! Civilian MC! Yes!!! This is one of te things I ignored in my previous fic, the prospect of the Sharingan is a bit too tempting, but now that I have gone through that disaster one time, I'll focus on writing a character that has no bloodlines... OP perks!! Yes!! Bloodlines? Noo....

The System: The Real Civilian Shinobi

Version_401
4.7
110 Chs

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ANANTA
ANANTALv4

MC TRAIT: A MASTER OF ALL & A CULTIVATOR?

1yr
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machadogbc
machadogbcLv15

Will there be a paring for the mc?

1yr
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OshinoAi
OshinoAiLv4

Who is the love interest?

1yr
1
Version_401
Version_401Author

Ino

machadogbc:Will there be a paring for the mc?
1yr
4
Version_401
Version_401Author

Ino

OshinoAi:Who is the love interest?
1yr
3
YourDad_
YourDad_Lv4

Tf!

Version_401:Ino
1yr
3
Lord_Azathoth
Lord_AzathothLv4

What's so good about her? If you like blonds, tamari would have been the best choice or that blondie Onna(boo*) from thunder village!!! I don't know why did you choose her but you should know that picking the wrong female for mc might drop the fic ratings!!!

Version_401:Ino
1yr
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luckky25
luckky25Lv4

Version_401:Ino
1yr
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anubis1650
anubis1650Lv5

I have a question before I start reading. I've read your other civilian Shinobi story and I was wondering if this is a different version of it or are you not continuing the other one and starting this one or something else entirely. I am just kind of confused since the name is the same save the word [real] in this story name

1yr
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Version_401
Version_401Author

It's entirely different, I'm just mocking my other story with the name!

anubis1650: I have a question before I start reading. I've read your other civilian Shinobi story and I was wondering if this is a different version of it or are you not continuing the other one and starting this one or something else entirely. I am just kind of confused since the name is the same save the word [real] in this story name
1yr
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Jhon_Ariel_Castro
Jhon_Ariel_CastroLv4

Oh, a civilian huh? Just like Hanabira from Murder Wizard by Bored_Mc

1yr
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Humbuub
HumbuubLv4

is this dropped again?

1yr
The_Dark_Hydrax
The_Dark_HydraxLv4

update?

1yr
RampagerX
RampagerXLv14

this story is quite good. i checked the other story title and mehhhh... so keep the good work with this one.ho and please, NO dungeon, it's a bit too easy to use them yo grow and the stories with dungeon make me loose interest.

1yr
Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

Does mc have a specialty

Version_401:It's entirely different, I'm just mocking my other story with the name!
11mth
NO_YURI_000
NO_YURI_000Lv4

What about konan¿

Version_401:Ino
2mth
Kaheem_Edmonds_3166
Kaheem_Edmonds_3166Lv3

Samui

1mth
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malinizgeldii
malinizgeldiiLv1

I think it's pretty good that mc isn't reincarnated. You never find mc's personality and behavior silly. I think he's acting his age. The novel is very pleasant to read. I suggest you read.

1yr

Ron_Adhak
Ron_AdhakLv1

Reveal spoiler

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BIGGRA
BIGGRALv1

So there's nothing obviously bad about this novel, it has a constant pace which is not too fast or too slow. The cheat is balanced and practical. The side characters aren't hallow and are fledged out. Its all good except its boring. Nothing of interest happens that you havent read in 10 other naruto fanfics, the cheat isn't too special and the plot points are mundane for a lack of better words. It doesn't get your blood pumping wanting to know whats going to happen next .it makes you feel like there's no reward at the end of the story. Its bland.

1yr
Humbuub
HumbuubLv4

aside from the changes in some major character's personality, I think this is pretty good. It's a system novel but not an Isekai, so a Civilian shinobi suddenly have a system, which I think is a clever twist compared to the countless Naruto fic out there.

1yr
EC_Wolf
EC_WolfLv13

Love it so far, and don't have any issue, seems pretty original too, the only issue is that there is a chance you abondon it, and you're a very talented writer with great ideas so i hope not. In the end, 5 stars for you

1yr
Knight7863
Knight7863Lv14

this is a good story compared to most Naruto fan fics that focus on the girls or the MC is just unbeatable and when he does get beaten once he goes into a deep depression but this one doesn't and that's very good so it has mine and Snape's approval

1yr
Griffin138
Griffin138Lv4

I hope the more of this!! I really liked the previous one..............I hope the more of this!! I really liked the previous one..............

1yr
Raul_Romero
Raul_RomeroLv11

(ch32) I must say that this book was a pleasant surprise, as always, I don't like to question things about the plot because it is the author's work, the Kenjutsu part seems good to me, but with a system it would be a waste not to include Ninjutsu, the system is an extremely useful tool to be a master of all trades, I find Fuinjutsu excellent, I know you don't want to do longer chs, but at least when it comes to training and Fuinjutsu I feel that you could extend them a little more to advance plot

1yr
AngelDdy11111
AngelDdy11111Lv3

Just have to show support I really enjoy the story and I want to read more thanks to the author for real much love and appreciation.

11mth
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