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Griffin138
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2023-06-16 04:29

I hope the more of this!! I really liked the previous one..............I hope the more of this!! I really liked the previous one..............

The System: The Real Civilian Shinobi

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Version_401
Version_401Author

Reveal spoiler

1yr

malinizgeldii
malinizgeldiiLv1

I think it's pretty good that mc isn't reincarnated. You never find mc's personality and behavior silly. I think he's acting his age. The novel is very pleasant to read. I suggest you read.

1yr
Ron_Adhak
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BIGGRA
BIGGRALv1

So there's nothing obviously bad about this novel, it has a constant pace which is not too fast or too slow. The cheat is balanced and practical. The side characters aren't hallow and are fledged out. Its all good except its boring. Nothing of interest happens that you havent read in 10 other naruto fanfics, the cheat isn't too special and the plot points are mundane for a lack of better words. It doesn't get your blood pumping wanting to know whats going to happen next .it makes you feel like there's no reward at the end of the story. Its bland.

1yr
Humbuub
HumbuubLv5

aside from the changes in some major character's personality, I think this is pretty good. It's a system novel but not an Isekai, so a Civilian shinobi suddenly have a system, which I think is a clever twist compared to the countless Naruto fic out there.

1yr
Manman13
Manman13Lv13

Love it so far, and don't have any issue, seems pretty original too, the only issue is that there is a chance you abondon it, and you're a very talented writer with great ideas so i hope not. In the end, 5 stars for you

1yr
Knight7863
Knight7863Lv14

this is a good story compared to most Naruto fan fics that focus on the girls or the MC is just unbeatable and when he does get beaten once he goes into a deep depression but this one doesn't and that's very good so it has mine and Snape's approval

1yr
Raume
RaumeLv11

(ch32) I must say that this book was a pleasant surprise, as always, I don't like to question things about the plot because it is the author's work, the Kenjutsu part seems good to me, but with a system it would be a waste not to include Ninjutsu, the system is an extremely useful tool to be a master of all trades, I find Fuinjutsu excellent, I know you don't want to do longer chs, but at least when it comes to training and Fuinjutsu I feel that you could extend them a little more to advance plot

1yr
AngelDdy11111
AngelDdy11111Lv3

Just have to show support I really enjoy the story and I want to read more thanks to the author for real much love and appreciation.

1yr
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