webnovel
ChenmoizmV
ChenmoizmVLv144mth
2024-07-03 12:23

This story still amazes me on a personal level with the Fox Spirit, Military Vets, lingo and training practices (not as detailed as I'd like, but with good overall explanation.) 'Dead Check Girl' and 'Shotgun loli' hit somewhere close to home. I really like the FL's take on pragmatic approaches towards prison societal procedures and I adore how Yang is also morally pragmatic about it with some struggle. 'LONG LIVE TANG' is still my motto, however, I'm not really into multiple partners, my kid would kill me if I had such a fetish. My job is rigorous, time consuming with lots of physical training for the boys, away from home for long period of time, and sometimes, commission jobs. My only mental break sometimes is reading, funny reads, amusing reads, brainy reads or reads that get my creative painting going. This story is nice, it hits spots where I wish regulations would ease up or if i had FL's monetary power or at least be her subordinate, I'd enjoy life more. Grammatically, it does need work, however, writers usually struggle monetarily because, you know, life happens. However, the literary aspect in terms of plot and direction is well thought out, so is the humor dialogue and action of different characters. I never give reviews or leave comments, but this story hit a satisfying spot. As a bibliophile, I like this story very much.

Liked by 1 people

LIKE
Replies4
PraiseElune
PraiseEluneAuthor

Thank you for your awesome support and I'm honored to be your first author to receive your review. I truly am grateful to you for sharing our life difficulties managing time and work plus survival, too. I hope you can enjoy what's about to come in the next chapters, and I'll try to meet my fans' expectations. If only were I excellent in AI arts, I would have drawn Tang Ziyi portraits. By the way, you receive my sincere wish to enjoy life more and more manifestation to come in your way.[img=recommend]

PraiseElune
PraiseEluneAuthor

Thank you for your awesome support and I'm honored to be your first author to receive your review. I truly am grateful to you for sharing our life difficulties managing time and work plus survival, too. I hope you can enjoy what's about to come in the next chapters, and I'll try to meet my fans' expectations. If only were I excellent in AI arts, I would have drawn Tang Ziyi portraits. By the way, you receive my sincere wish to enjoy life more and more manifestation to come in your way.[img=recommend]

ChenmoizmV
ChenmoizmVLv14

I don’t need it. I can already see Tang in my head. Like I said. If u had a good editor. This story is good enough for print.

PraiseElune:Thank you for your awesome support and I'm honored to be your first author to receive your review. I truly am grateful to you for sharing our life difficulties managing time and work plus survival, too. I hope you can enjoy what's about to come in the next chapters, and I'll try to meet my fans' expectations. If only were I excellent in AI arts, I would have drawn Tang Ziyi portraits. By the way, you receive my sincere wish to enjoy life more and more manifestation to come in your way.[img=recommend]
PraiseElune
PraiseEluneAuthor

Thank you. I don't know where i can find a good editor when I'm struggling with money myself xD

ChenmoizmV:I don’t need it. I can already see Tang in my head. Like I said. If u had a good editor. This story is good enough for print.
Other Reviews
Related Stories

The Demon King is an Idiot [BL]

Are you afraid of death? For Jie Fu Lian, who had already come to terms with his death, the thought of being alive was scarier. Although his death was quite tragic, he still lived a fulfilling life. He had done everything that he had wanted to do and he had achieved everything that he had strived for. Even as he died, he only had a single regret. He regretted the fact that he couldn't thank Hua Tianshu, an enemy who had stood up for him till the end. His death was quite painful but he wasn't unhappy with it. However, it should have ended right there. Why the hell was he now possessing the body of a tyrannical demon king?! The heavens above were certainly playing with him and laughing at his misfortune! As if possessing the body of his enemy wasn't enough, out of all the people that he could run into, why did he have to run into Hua Tianshu?! Just when Jie Fu Lian thought his luck couldn't get any worse, Hua Tianshu just had to go and recognize him as well! "Is this what an ill-fated relationship means?" Jie Fu Lian's lips twitched. It was as if even death couldn't break the red strings that had tied the two of them together. "Why are you so nice to me?" “You wouldn’t believe me even if I told you the reason,” Hua Tianshu sighed. “You are falsely accusing me. I trust everything you tell me.” “I like you.” “I like you too, brother,” Jie Fu Lian beamed, however, this response only disappointed Hua Tianshu whose words had been misunderstood once again. “We are clearly not on the same page,” Hua Tianshu sighed as he turned around and left. Jie Fu Lian frowned as he tilted his head cluelessly. The new demon king is a thick-headed idiot who can’t even take a hint! Cover art by: Cherlyswan

cherlyswan · LGBT+
4.7
200 Chs

Chasing And Claiming My Rejected Omega Mate:Alpha’s Severe Regret [BL]

Born an omega in a time where omegas are rare and unwanted, Rory lived a life whereby he was always a second option in every situation. Omegas couldn’t birth pups, so no one wanted to be mated to them, except to fuck them and move on. He thought he was lucky to be betrothed to an alpha who loved him, but after a shocking betrayal, his heart turned to stone. Fleeing for his life led him into the clutches of Jason, a dangerous, ruthless wolf. He loses his virginity to him and the morning after, he realized that this soulless Alpha is his fated mate. But, once again, Rory is reminded of his curse of always being a second option when he got rejected. As if that wasn’t enough, he soon realized his life is in immense danger. Rory then decides to run away and start afresh in a different country. One thing Rory didn’t expect to happen, was for him to end up pregnant weeks after fleeing! ~~~ Years later, Rory now has an adorable son. He wasn’t the timid omega he once was, because he had managed to rise to the very top. Along the line, he managed to open his heart up to Kenny, a cute Alpha who loved and cherished him wholeheartedly, leading him to live a contented life. But when he collides with Jason this time, he wants nothing to do with the alpha who rejected him in the past. Jason, an Alpha of Alphas, felt his wolf wilt away the day he rejected his omega mate. He tried making things right, but the pretty omega who smelled of wildflowers and vanilla had completely disappeared from the face of earth. Now that he had encountered Rory again, he wasn’t ready to receive ‘no’ for an answer, and he was ready to do whatever it takes to get the omega’s forgiveness. However, Kenny wasn’t ready to let go of Rory either! A fight for the omega’s heart, who’s gonna emerge the victor? And what if they decide to share instead? | - | e x c e r p t | -| “Arch for me, pup.” The dark alpha husked and more color rushed into Rory’s face as the order settled in his stomach. For the first time in his life, Rory was completely nude in front of a man. He had assumed losing his virginity was gonna be brisk, and that it was gonna happen in the dark. He never counted on it going down this way, with an alpha whose dark eyes made his weak kneed and tongue tied, whose voice made his insides clench up, and whose touch made slick gush out of him like he was a faulty faucet. He pressed his flushed face into the sandalwood smelling sheets, limbs trembling as he arched his back even more, till his ass was very high and his chest pressed into the bed as well. “There you go, that’s a good boy.” The Alpha growled out, hands reaching out to knead his hips, and when he delivered a spank on Rory’s ass, a stuttered whimper spilled past the pretty omega’s mouth, muffled in the sheets. Moments later, fingers were digging into the omega’s hair, jerking his head up just as another spank got delivered on his second cheek, and this time, there was nothing to muffle the high pitched sound and it filled the air in a melodic tune. “Don’t muffle those sweet sounds, gorgeous. I want to hear every sound you make, I need to hear you as you fall apart from pleasure in my bed tonight, and that’s exactly what’s gonna happen.” * Cover isn’t mine. If owner requests, I’d take it down.

Bree_Airee · LGBT+
4.7
91 Chs

Broken Bond: Between Vices and Virtues (BL)

Synopsis: Knox is an omega – poor, orphaned, weak, and bullied. He was the unluckiest human being alive – according to his own. Burdened by debt, he has no choice but to stop school and work to pay off his loans all the while hiding the truth and pretending as a beta to save himself from harassment. He accepted all legal jobs he could get to make ends meet. Including a contractual relationship with an alpha who’s suffering from a pheromone disability. He gets paid – enough to free him from all of his debts. All he has to do is help the alpha stabilize his pheromone…not until that night happens… The contract was breached. Knox has to pay the price. Afraid of his circumstances, he ran away. Years later, Knox became a capable man. He has a nice job and a kind boss. When his boss got invited to an engagement party, as his secretary, Knox had to come with him. However, he was shocked to find out that the man to be engaged was none other than the spitting image of his son! How will Knox keep the truth from him, when after their eyes met at the party, the alpha had already marked him as his property, claiming him as the payment of the contract he breached? Will Knox hide and run away again? Or will he choose to pay off the debt to be free? Will he be able to push away the alpha whose vices are hidden behind his attractive mask or will Knox abandon his virtues and embrace the dangerous father of his son? --- Thank you all for your support! For faster update, send my book your golden tickets, powerstones, and gifts!!

superAyan · LGBT+
5.0
268 Chs