pretty boring. ......................................................................................................................................
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LIKEFrom what I've read, the interactions with the system are annoying and there’s too much text just to say one or two thing. Show not tell. I've not gone past the first few chapters, so I can’t tell you more than that.
PraiseElune:Could you please tell me which one or what part? At least, it could help me see from the other perspectives. My writing and storytelling will improve based on your words.
So…u didn’t read past chapter 32 and made low blow comment? That’s scary.
ScarletQC:From what I've read, the interactions with the system are annoying and there’s too much text just to say one or two thing. Show not tell. I've not gone past the first few chapters, so I can’t tell you more than that.