This is something new dear author. As the world background and your writing ability are top-notch. Relationships, emotions and a tragic story that every spiderman has.Peter Parker is one of most unluckiest character in comics I don't know writers hated him or something where he can't have a happy life. This Dark Spider feels like a kindred spirit where no killing rule of the heroes as always been a mental block to them and this includes peter parker who always holds back even if his loved ones are killed. There are five key elements to every story: plot, setting, characters, point of view, and conflict. And you have done it absolutely well by this book. I hope this continues to become a great book on web novel. Kudos..😊. I hope you keep surprising us through Leo Vargas journey.

I don't like this fic. Like at all! Coz it's too tragic. But that's what it was aimed to be and I Assure everyone that it passes the test with flying colors imo. The conflict, the drama, the emotions! and the sorrow sadness, the despair of tragedy... It's all so raw in this fic. I love the writing style. Even with such a short amount of chapters I still felt so connected with the characters that the tragedies had me restless. And that's why I don't like it. Don't recommend it to anyone looking for a happy go life friendly neighbourhood Spiderman. This stuff is hardcore all the time, like after Gwen dies in TASM 2 level hardcore. Anyone looking for deepdive into emotion territory, do give this one a try.

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This look Great. Finally a Dark spider man who will kill. I love it. I hope you won't drop this fanfic

Amazing story so far it’s my favourite hope you continue writing