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uRb4IN_
uRb4IN_Lv151yr
2023-10-03 02:08

It is as good as it is bad. The pace and development prove how far and well Avan prepared this story to be. Yet, it also shows that this story was written or ended up in a tunnel-vision. Every scene itself might look exciting to fantasize about but in the world-spectrum, as a whole, it looks like another teenager's idea. Doesn't take much more than 7-8 chapters to bury this book prematurely. And in my opinion, it is these 2 chapters especially that show how well-thought-through this story setting is. PS: It's not been thought through well enough.

Re: Apocalypse Game

Avan
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238 Chs

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jesuds
jesudsLv13

took the words out of my mouth

1yr
Avan
AvanAuthor

thank u for the comment, but the game not even started untill chapter 9 though..

jesuds:took the words out of my mouth
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miu_hozuki
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This is my 'go to ' trope. As such, I will like this story regardless of how droll it could get, yet, I found my self loving the story. It's written well, planned well and still has surprises to offer even to a veteran reader like me. Recommend it x 1000 times !

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jhsk
jhskLv4

Story is great as well as the storytelling but man the upload schedule need to have more AKA plz more chp this is one of my favourite novel in this app.

1yr
Captain_Spoiler
Captain_SpoilerLv13

Honest reviews are here.. First of all, this is not OP MC with cheats' skills.. MC only has his memories from his past life, which is 3 years before he dead.. MC growth is quite slow.. All skills he had during previous life can not be used anymore.. MC got a lot of burden teammates, which was just a drag (MC is not soloing).. The MC skills are also boring and weak.. I kinda feel that I won't like the direction of this novel going.. This novel is not my type.. If MC has at least ONE OP SUPERPOWER, it is going to be interesting, but MC doesn't have even one.. There is no uniqueness in MC except for his memories from his reincarnated, even his status window: Strength, Agility, Intelligence are weak and there is Spirit stat too, you might thing that, due to his reincarnated, MC has a strong Spirit stat (Soul or Will) but his Spirit is his LOWEST and WEAKEST stat he had... As I said, there is no uniqueness in MC.. So, gudluck to you guys if you ever want to read this..

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Bogdan7
Bogdan7Lv5

This is part of the trend of novels using a LOT of pompuos words to describe almost every thing or action (mostly for word count). I mean in every chapter there is at least 1 (usualy more) uses of "cacophony", "whirlwind", "symphony" and other such words that just make the story tiring. I mean, does every single gun fight need to be a "cacophony of deafening thunders" (or something similar)?? This is just to tiring and bothersome to read....

1yr
Heathjett
HeathjettLv14

Please upload more also I love the way you started this novel and I love the idea of him reincarnating into the past. Please 🙏 upload more!!!!!!!!!!!

1yr
Smile_Jorjie
Smile_JorjieLv11

Author like my comment please... I'm a huge fan

1yr
crownklown
crownklownLv11

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Marlonxx
MarlonxxLv10

one of the best reads. seriously underated ............................................................................................................

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AppleCheese0
AppleCheese0Lv15

Very good take on regressor trope with interesting characters and settings

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