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Bogdan7
Bogdan7Lv61yr
2023-10-21 23:55

This is part of the trend of novels using a LOT of pompuos words to describe almost every thing or action (mostly for word count). I mean in every chapter there is at least 1 (usualy more) uses of "cacophony", "whirlwind", "symphony" and other such words that just make the story tiring. I mean, does every single gun fight need to be a "cacophony of deafening thunders" (or something similar)?? This is just to tiring and bothersome to read....

Re: Apocalypse Game

Avan
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238 Chs

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Avan
AvanAuthor

thank you for comment, i guess not everyone cup of tea

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This is my 'go to ' trope. As such, I will like this story regardless of how droll it could get, yet, I found my self loving the story. It's written well, planned well and still has surprises to offer even to a veteran reader like me. Recommend it x 1000 times !

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jhsk
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Story is great as well as the storytelling but man the upload schedule need to have more AKA plz more chp this is one of my favourite novel in this app.

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uRb4IN_
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It is as good as it is bad. The pace and development prove how far and well Avan prepared this story to be. Yet, it also shows that this story was written or ended up in a tunnel-vision. Every scene itself might look exciting to fantasize about but in the world-spectrum, as a whole, it looks like another teenager's idea. Doesn't take much more than 7-8 chapters to bury this book prematurely. And in my opinion, it is these 2 chapters especially that show how well-thought-through this story setting is. PS: It's not been thought through well enough.

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Captain_Spoiler
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Honest reviews are here.. First of all, this is not OP MC with cheats' skills.. MC only has his memories from his past life, which is 3 years before he dead.. MC growth is quite slow.. All skills he had during previous life can not be used anymore.. MC got a lot of burden teammates, which was just a drag (MC is not soloing).. The MC skills are also boring and weak.. I kinda feel that I won't like the direction of this novel going.. This novel is not my type.. If MC has at least ONE OP SUPERPOWER, it is going to be interesting, but MC doesn't have even one.. There is no uniqueness in MC except for his memories from his reincarnated, even his status window: Strength, Agility, Intelligence are weak and there is Spirit stat too, you might thing that, due to his reincarnated, MC has a strong Spirit stat (Soul or Will) but his Spirit is his LOWEST and WEAKEST stat he had... As I said, there is no uniqueness in MC.. So, gudluck to you guys if you ever want to read this..

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Heathjett
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Please upload more also I love the way you started this novel and I love the idea of him reincarnating into the past. Please 🙏 upload more!!!!!!!!!!!

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Author like my comment please... I'm a huge fan

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Reveal spoiler

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one of the best reads. seriously underated ............................................................................................................

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