The author slices and splices multiple stories, alternate versions of them, and their laws of physics into basically one amalgamation of nonsense. basically excuses every absurd action in the story and justifies its existence. majority of paragraphs involving the story usually are followed up with some sparknotes of the; what, why, when, where, and hows. If not that it'll be fun facts or introspective monologs about the original worlds this reality is based off or his memories. it destroys any chance of immersion. Also, he was supposed to not have powers but he goes from Vin diesel in the first fast in the furious movie then three chapters later its fast in the furious 7 and Vin diesel is stomping and collapsing parking lots. the only law in this story is the Law of convenience. So if you don't care for any framework or actual foundation and are happy with just hanging on for dear life and seeing where this story takes you then its right for you. overall its not a bad story, grammar seems pretty great and its unique overall. MC is basically the trending WN MC but quirkier, basically his moral stance is he doesn't have one.
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