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SnowApathie
SnowApathieLv41yr
2023-01-21 17:14

An other masterpiece from Eren_fraser. While for now there are only six chapter, its alredy awesome. This story is about a primordial something that has not really be done before. Long chapters with great development and as of now a really interesting plot. From what I have seen the mc seems to have the same personality as the one from his other stories (so wanting to be free, cold except for his close family and his lover. Intelligent and calculative). The story takes inspiration from Dream, with Hypnos creating the dreaming. Like always no grammatical nor typing error and many updates. This is a PJO ff but I have a question, is it also Marvel? because Hypnos said Hela and not Hel (her name in mythology). Overall a fantastic story to read if you like great ffs with character development and plot development and not everything always being repetitive and not wish-fuffilment. (Sheesh I wrote too many and but I don't have the motivation to change it lol. Hope this review helped.)

Percy Jackson : The Odyssey of a Primordial.

Eren_fraser
4.8
42 Chs

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Eren_fraser
Eren_fraser作者

My story is happening in Percy Jackson universe with the additions of most myths. There will be no marvel. As for Hel, she was also called Hela in some versions.

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SnowApathie
SnowApathieLv4

oh ok i didn't know that I just thought marvel adapted her name.

Eren_fraser:My story is happening in Percy Jackson universe with the additions of most myths. There will be no marvel. As for Hel, she was also called Hela in some versions.
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