Item: The Cricket Match That Changed Everything
Rating: 2

noval_patelLv41yr

2023-07-22 17:17

unstable and inconsistent is what call this book lot of potential but gone because this story is all over the place. on stat he remember his last life but then he forgots everything. he moved to up. at 11 and start playing for them but he keep on saying he plays for Delhi all the way this just some of inconsistency........

The Cricket Match That Changed Everything

wheretonow

4.6

81 Chs

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wheretonowAuthor

when he was 11 he was playing for Delhi. It was not before 16 he started playing for India.

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I hope you don't abandon this halfway. I'm interested in the story. It looks pretty good. I'll be waiting to read more chapters. This has potential..

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Following the unwritten rules and giving myself a 5 star.

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Ductor_StorageLv13

This is best cricket fanfiction I've read on all of internet and the good quality and insight you give us is a big plus.Hope you get more support and continue this🙌.

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pingpongddadsLv1

I just read the entire story in one sitting its so good and first cricket fanfiction that I read, writing is also very good but I seriously hope this story isn't dropped, author please continue your story

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Good writing and thank you for giving some insights.I really hope you keep updating 🙌

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MIR_DevalanciLv4

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