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2023-05-03 20:45

This has been a blast so far nearing the end of volume 1 to any avid reader that would like to delve in a cricket fanfic this would be an ideal choise but do keep in mind this fanfic is heavily laced with Indian perspective making it a bit awkward for others. This story is ver inviting and good plot development though I must admit it seemed to falter a lot, like streching up in academy years, a sudden blitzering through unimportant parts, a bit of experiments here and there and complete to partial inconsideration on the world around mc. But I must admit 馃槈, it has been a 馃槉 joy ride for me. The story is overall focused, questions left unanswered to add to mystery, strong main charector development, not undergoing any roadblocks, mc incredibly dedicated to his purpose not 馃毇 getting distracted while the plot moves alongside him in a symphony. To anyone and everyone 馃挐 out there give it a proper try and by 50ish chapters you will fall 馃崅 in love with it (given you do understand cricket terminology and many things are just cited as a fact with no explanation).

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