let me tell you clearly. I think axel should have been involved much further into the main story. because I think he shouldn't have been this strong against the spider gang in this state. Besides, both his enemies and himself constantly call himself inexperienced, but he is a very experienced fighter. He killed people and fought with very different Nen abilities. I think it's ridiculous that he underestimates himself too much and has too many ops. I've added this to my notes and will continue to read it in the future.

Snooze-fest. 40 chapters in and it is almost completely exposition, small amount of dialog, and Alot of Ocs we don't get the description or personality of. Not to mention that the MC refuses to get in the plot any which way, Which would be fine if he did his own thing but he doesn't. He watches almost every main fight, monolog about it, realizes the importance of training harder, and reaffirms that he will not get involved in the plot. My advice to the author, pick a lane. If you are going to show the story get involved, if not then avoid the plot like the plague if it is not a major plot like the chimera ant plot. Right now the fic seems really whishy-washy. Finally get and editor or ask chat gpt how to describe the nen abilities better. The secondary aura thing only make the barest of sense to me.

This is what most should want to say when they read this story. The personality of ms is not as weak as in most krinzh stories, however, due to the large accent of secondary characters, he seems not only weak but also stupid at some points. In general, this is 4, but I do not like stories where there is a bunch of useless information that you don’t want to read. Overall it's 3/5

I dont know why no one has addressed it yet but it is very difficult to read this story. There is no continuity. In one scene we are reading about MC and then cut to some scene between some OCs from the middle without any context and then suddenly cut to some other MC scene in the middle of it or his thinking. It is even more difficult to read than a Chinese MTL. I can ignore the massive grammar and pronouns change issues but this break the story immersion for me. It would be a good read if you can ignore these things as decent hxh novels are very difficult to find here.

Honestly not that bad of a fanfic but can use a few improvement in the pov department because i sometimes don't know who the character the author is mentioning or who we are looking this pov at. Also every chapter is very short. For his cheat is ok but he can instantly become OP if he just skipped the plot and focus on training, i mean it will not make a good book and he wants to be a witness, all I'm saying is if he wants to just be OP he can literally do it instantly from his perspective. Overall it's alright to read, does not make your brain want to punch the author so i say that is a plus.

I like hunter x hunter so pls update more

This is a very good transmigration story, I found the story quite engaging. I found the character building to be quite average. I liked this fanfic, because it's HunterXHunter

劇透

La manera en la que escribe y se desarrollan las cosas se siente como si hablara de alguien más tercera persona avanza muy rápido y a menudo es incoherente