Item: Danmachi: The Crimson Flash
Rating: 1.4

ConstellatingJadeLv31yr

2023-10-09 13:23

You got me on the first chapter but then instantly lost me in the second chapter with that whole name fiasco Also why skip like nearly his entire character building? 8 years of content skipped? Like I wanted to see my guy experience new things because this was something new to him; as he was a god his whole life. I wanted him to experience life as something new and see what he could achieve with his own hands that he created, I wanted that kind of interaction with his character as he is interested with everything this world could offer him (like a baby curious about its own little world in a house) also the writing was ok.

Danmachi: The Crimson Flash

Plagiarist_Astre

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