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Pooyan_Hoshyar
Pooyan_HoshyarLv42yr
2023-02-22 03:41

I dropped it after chapter 32... The MC was strong with even stronger skills but author kinda ruined the story by adding a system... Well I could get past that but there are chapters that are just filled with system notifications and anything system related and even during fights which is very annoying and somehow he keeps getting high graded stuffs from the system... MC was a lonely god with a very boring life so when he became a mortal he decided to have a simple life which means as long as he can earn enough money to provide food and the necessities and experience new things he'll be content with his life that means he has no intention of ever going back to the realm of gods or becoming one ever again but dude went straight and made Welf his loyal slave with a skill he obtained from system lol... So whatever Welf or any of his future companions say is not genuine they're just under a spell... Thers is no bond between them.... If you're a fan of novels with systems this is for you but I'm sure even you'll be sick of it soon... Author has good grasp on grammar and a great imagination and creativity sense.

Danmachi: The Crimson Flash

Plagiarist_Astre
3.3
61 Chs

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Careful, he might delete delete your review😂🤣🦆

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Even at the start, I'm very satisfied. Main is not so weak and pathetic but a competent one. Not so OP at the start but not irritating.

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I have been enjoying this so far mr. Author keep up the good work

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NeonPLay250
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actually I'm disappointed. When I started reading this novel, I really liked it, but then everything went downhill. I think I should have quit back then when in the second chapter they started using Uchiha instead of Faust (an annoying topic). The second wake-up call was that, relying on a piece of "memory", the main character began to spam chakra techniques (in the danmachi world this is mana), but my patience snapped when the system was added. WHAT THE HECK? Generally off topic. The main character is a psychopath. Anyone who disagrees with him is bad. Disgusting work. (English is not my native language)

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Is it worth counting on regular updates?[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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Muslim_man
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Delete this one too Am gona keep doing this so ye

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Reveal spoiler

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I'm really disappointed that the Author didn't choose the name Bob Uchiha

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Kind of ruined it by erasing name! Also Made him to powerful to quickly.

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Dropped fanfics should be removed from the popular section.........

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