MC has the eloquence of a 10 year old, but everyone thinks he is super convincing. He just one-sidedly spits out long monologues, without any real conversation, and everyone joins him like some NPCs. After the 16th "You are very convincing indeed", I had to abandon this novel, otherwise I will die of shame, if I continue reading this.

I like this story but I have one question, what do you mean by digging Konoha? Please explain.

Honestly the story is way out, I didn't mind reading the story with my brain turned off at the start but then the third shinbi war happened. Firstly the war only lasted a few months and then at the end of the war a year turned over from 46 to 47 and suddenly Neji and his generation is being born and the akatsuki has already being established even though Nagato and the other members of the akatsuki are still supposed to be children by this point in time. I'll just chalk it up to it being a CN that it turned out like this.

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There are lot of things that drag the novel down 1. Mc seems like mastermind or at the least author tries to portray him as such. But the thing is that it's not realistic in the slightest and feels childish how easily he gets everything done. 2. His power is the one that makes the most impact for my 1star review. TRUE escanors power has a huge drawback. Making him a glass cannon like superman. And once you know his kryptonite even a normal human could kill him. Bur this is Naruto universe you know that you are weak in night. Then shouldn't you atheist learn something to save yourself. The dude enters war where he fights entire village in day and the village protects him during night. This is perhaps the stupidest use of espanol powers in Naruto. 3. It would be fine if escanor was a planet buster or invincible in Naruto universe. Then it would have made sense for him having such a huge weakness but he is not. There are many people and ways to seal or even kill him. And that is what makes his weakness frustrating. Especially when the Mc does nothing about his night weakness.

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Well. .. This is CN Fanfic. Tbh writing Quality was good (thanks to the Translators) just some mistakes/errors about gender of characters ..

overall it isn't a horrible story. keep in mind that at the time of this comment I am at chapter 12 I think. however the translation is trash making understanding certain things very hard. sometimes impossible without looking it up on Google Translate.

If your reading this like I was to see some Escanor lvl bs and bravado this is not the one for us. Either it was lost during the translation, or the author refuses to use an iota of Escanor other then his powers in which he spams suns and blows them up and punches people impossibly hard. The MC is tipical arrogant I’m the MC, everyone do as I say and our enemies will do exactly what I choose. The MC is around 10years old with little to no training and no chakra moves or Naruto justsus that he uses on the enemy. If this were not a fanfic you would not see any characters beyond pawn b attacks mc. Biju p attacks mc ect… so to sum up the first 50 chaps mc tells his village what to do. Spams suns and punches faceless people with 0 IQ. It’s like one punch man if 100% of the comedy was removed, the mc was 10 and no one had any dialog other then, “That’s an amazing plan! How come I didn’t know that?!” Imagine becoming Arnold Schwarzenegger and not using a single punchline of his at all.