NeonPLay250

The story is boring, the main character is absolutely useless. The story is about nothing. No goals, with each chapter mc contradicts itself. Idleness + women. 0 hours of training or effort but still behaves cool. Slave of the system. I really regret those hours that I spent on 80 chapters

very interesting, the story is quite lively. The main character is also not bad. But it would be nice if the author translated the chapters faster than at least 3-5 per day considering that there are almost 3 hundred of them in the original. Use chat gpt for translation and use minimal editing. + The story is interesting. - Long wait. If possible, tell me where (website) I can read the original in full. I could not register in ciweimao

On which site can I read this in full?

I was completely disappointed, I saw a large number of chapters in this work and decided to read and in the beginning everything was even good, but closer to chapter 100 it turns into absurdity. Too many appeals of the “author of 4 dimensions” from an intellectual school novel, this has turned into a cheap comedy. Constant meaningless monologues. The characters became stupid. The character of the characters is not preserved. The first 50 chapters are false. I believed and deceived me.

Is the book abandoned or is the author going to rewrite it? If the second, how soon can we expect it?

I read this fic on the Chinese site almost up to chapter 400 and I can say that it is definitely not bad. This is different from regular fics in that it doesn't lick tan san or the hall of spirits. The main character is a time traveler who ended up in the body of Tang San. (not the original hero) He is not an ungrateful bastard or a master of double standards, but scientists from the 21st century. The story is quite good, but after 350 chapters it gets too attached to relationships and women and the main meaning gradually fades away. What also makes this novel interesting is that there are other time travelers who hate him, I don’t know that he is not the original hero. Overall, not bad. I strongly advise you to read the original text up to chapter 300 if you can handle Google translation. 8/10

The idea is good, but the story is boring. There is no tension or adventure. There is no spirit of exploration and adventurism. Everything is presented on a silver platter to the main character. He just touches but there is no motivation for him. Women are also boring and like stereotypes. in ~10 days he reached the strength of those who trained for decades, which is why the line between levels is blurred. I would understand if he slowly mastered magic and skills, but they are simply inherited. Boring and dry

Hell, that's not how it works. characteristics cannot increase indefinitely. 10 mile units for the first level and 10 units for the second are not the same thing. I thought it would stop at 1499 or 1999 but instead it continues to accumulate stats. It's very banal and boring. Where are the quality improvements??? And magic is also useless in most cases. you're just filling chapters with a ton of useless information and increasing the length of the text. How much water do you still need? Aren't spells like "evolution" better? fireball -> fire arrow -> rain of arrows -> meteorite, etc. and here are boring spells. Or the gradual mastery of the elements, for example fire, water, wind, earth, metal, wood, lightning, light, darkness. The system itself has not been disclosed. The author wants to portray his character as chaotic, but he's just a self-righteous idiot. Orario is a chaotic place. The difference between levels cannot be overcome with two spells. Characteristics shouldn't work like that. Gods demand respect for themselves even if they walk among people.

at first it was quite interesting but after 100 chapters I began to realize that I was reading MTL a Chinese novel but with Japanese names. Absolutely everything is looped. Everything the main character does is just copies of old games. No tension. As if there are no smart people in the world. He simply recreates games from our world and that's it. then buys up Companies or shares and contacts his company. In general, this is just a retelling of the events of 1990-2000, but if there was KiShin. The main character is boring. Absolutely nothing new. They just say from time to time how cool he is and that’s all. Typical Chinese MC.

Thanks for the chapter. We are waiting for stable development without clichés