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2023-11-13 22:37

Nice backstory and development, but the MC is just stupid. I got to 170, he now has his private dungeon with a time difference, tons of manuels and mana types and what does he do, he goes out hunting. Ok, again from the beginning, I'm not even talking about the fact that he keeps making estimates and they don't come true, but rather that he doesn't use everything to survive in the apocalypse. The tree with the 8 fruits, rank 2. Did he research their price, we don't know, but he didn't research the price of the pills either. That would be the first thing to do in the garage to be able to estimate when the creation is plus minus 0. Back to the fruits, assuming he can get them for 50,000 gold, because rank 2, prices probably rise exponentially. Then he gives the boy 2 and doesn't consume any himself so as not to get too strong. For 100,000 gold he could have possibly bought all the basic knowledge for everyone in his group and if he had then implemented any of it, he would definitely have gotten a regular job. But no, 6 Rank 2 fruits are there until chapter 170. He doesn't pick up quest rewards either. Days go by, he was in the dungeon for 3 days, but no, no time. Let's wait until we have a safe place. What could never have happened in the apocalypse. And then he has this space where time passes more slowly and he just doesn't use it. He goes out hunting instead of converting the things he has into his power.

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