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IronM
IronMLv41yr
2022-12-27 07:44

story development-character design- world background. the author added nothing of his own to this story other than having the MC be control by the author like in the game where we play has the MC. and just follow the story, which explains the stability of updates. we all know these character, nothing is the authors. if the author made his own character than yea sure. but do something interesting. Because even now GI is still an developing story. you have the whole world of GI to write about and use but instead just copy and paste the story. that's something the author can do in the future. but now the author created nothing even if this's an fan-fic. which puts it in the low-ter of fan-fic

Genshin Impact: Another Life

some_writer
3.9

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沒有回復。 來，成為第一個評論的人！

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Clerith
ClerithLv1

The biggest problem of the story is that the author is likely a young teenager, and doesn't really have a firm idea of what they want to write. So they end up writing whatever mess they have in mind right now. It gets pretty random and chaotic at times. The author also seems to think that being a creepy molester is okay and that is makes people fall in love with you. Roughly follows the original plotline, but the author is desperate to make it AU, to the point of writing illogical, weird nonsense sometimes. Characters have random personalities. Genders are bent. Some weird events and stuff comes out of nowhere. Powers from other popular manga worlds. It's hard to take the fic seriously because of this. The way relationships form and there's random conflict just because especially is very unrealistic. The author also probably cares about readers' comments too much, and adjusts the story, and nerfs the MC, based on comments, which isn't very stable. Overall it qualifies as a decent waste of time, just don't expect anything too special. Some stuff might turn you away easily.

1yr

TFH
TFHLv6

well... its not bad. author needs to improve his writing skills and focus less in mundane tasks. he spent 1 chapter tellibg how mc caught and cooked a fish....sadly author dosnt likes comments in his novel and tells readers to shut up and cant take a joke. not recommended.

2yr
Loophus
LoophusLv4

Yuri x harem = trash was have a good time until chapter 17 and bam just killed the story with forced Yuri trash

1yr
some_writer
some_writer作者

I am Shameless. I started playing Genshin Impact weeks ago and I am now AR 33. You can come find me if you want . My username is Alexia. But I don't have a lot of time playing with you guys because I need some solo time you know . Enjoy the book and have a fun time traveling through the mysterious world of Teyvat.

2yr
Zenron
ZenronLv3

Can you post this on scribblehub, now computer users can't read any fanfiction on webnovel it seems.....................................................

2yr
TheSlumberingWolf
TheSlumberingWolfLv4

The author raged quit and ran away because he couldn't handle criticism and trolls. He also deleted all his fics, destroying his entire reader-base and demolished their trust while wasting their time spent reading his fics. Quite frankly it's pathetic, but what's done is done. Massive L.

2mth
Zenron
ZenronLv3

Hey. I am a computer user and is there any way I can read this on any website?..............................................................

2yr
OkayVelvet
OkayVelvetLv3

Genshin virgin 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😅😆😅😅😅😅😅😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

1yr
Wolfe_pack22
Wolfe_pack22Lv14

im writing this hoping to get an answer of why u deleted everything man they were so good im sad😭😭😭😭

2mth
NeaCambelt
NeaCambeltLv1

Trop gringe pour moi dsl [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

2yr
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