The biggest problem of the story is that the author is likely a young teenager, and doesn't really have a firm idea of what they want to write. So they end up writing whatever mess they have in mind right now. It gets pretty random and chaotic at times. The author also seems to think that being a creepy molester is okay and that is makes people fall in love with you. Roughly follows the original plotline, but the author is desperate to make it AU, to the point of writing illogical, weird nonsense sometimes. Characters have random personalities. Genders are bent. Some weird events and stuff comes out of nowhere. Powers from other popular manga worlds. It's hard to take the fic seriously because of this. The way relationships form and there's random conflict just because especially is very unrealistic. The author also probably cares about readers' comments too much, and adjusts the story, and nerfs the MC, based on comments, which isn't very stable. Overall it qualifies as a decent waste of time, just don't expect anything too special. Some stuff might turn you away easily.

well... its not bad. author needs to improve his writing skills and focus less in mundane tasks. he spent 1 chapter tellibg how mc caught and cooked a fish....sadly author dosnt likes comments in his novel and tells readers to shut up and cant take a joke. not recommended.

Yuri x harem = trash was have a good time until chapter 17 and bam just killed the story with forced Yuri trash

I am Shameless. I started playing Genshin Impact weeks ago and I am now AR 33. You can come find me if you want . My username is Alexia. But I don't have a lot of time playing with you guys because I need some solo time you know . Enjoy the book and have a fun time traveling through the mysterious world of Teyvat.

Can you post this on scribblehub, now computer users can't read any fanfiction on webnovel it seems.....................................................

The author raged quit and ran away because he couldn't handle criticism and trolls. He also deleted all his fics, destroying his entire reader-base and demolished their trust while wasting their time spent reading his fics. Quite frankly it's pathetic, but what's done is done. Massive L.

Hey. I am a computer user and is there any way I can read this on any website?..............................................................

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Hey what the hell happened to the fanfic i was reading it again but it says now every chapter is deleted. why the hell it happend .