Item: Fractured Through Time
Rating: 4.6

Homeless_TravelerLv12yr

2022-08-05 19:22

the premise is interesting, the world-building is done greatly, and the elaborated explanation is perfect. this novel seems very promising. So far there's nothing to nitpick

Fractured Through Time

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