Maybe I'm biased towards such texts but this novel is great. The plot is exciting and it has a wide room for extending itself. It seems to have consitantly good writing and I don't think it will disapoint anyone! 11/10

Its really really interesting story if you loved any of the journey movies (journey to the center of the earth or journey to the mysterious island) you will love this it has on of craziest world buildings you can see even from the very first chapter out there love you author for writing such a fabulous piece of art

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I feel as though the writing quality could be improved as the author's descriptive ability is currently lacking but it's not actually bad enough for u to repulse it its actually quite doable basically a cake with all the ingredients but missing the icing that makes it look better and more attractive. The book all in all albeit 1 chapter isn't too bad and I can say that its a good first try for the author

Good Novel! Love the premise. Good grammar and world building. Hope to see more chapters soon. I wish you good luck in WSA. This has a lot a potential.

it got a nice idea bro you tell the story and details nice .. however it would be very nice if continue the chapter a bit and add something that triggered more of there curiousity. hope you guys continue doing good work.

Wowey! Someone call an ambulance because I have no breath left! Just jokes. This debut chapter is one of, if not the best chapter I have read on this website. It includes many elements such as the beginnings of great character structure as well as building this fantastic world. I feel like I relate dearly to the main character and even made be shed a tear once or twice. I do have a few things I would like to suggest to a new author such as this brilliant one. I believe the characters should be balanced between genders and race so that it reaches and relates to the vaster majority of people. Then we can go main stream baby! I also LOVE the early mentions of the main character’s north-eastern roots and how he used to kick the sand out of boredom out the front of his bedroom window. I also use to do this but instead of sand, it was my hamster. Another point I would like to bring up during this opportunity to contact such an epic author is that your choice of title is perfect for such a tone and storyline. Even though we have not yet been emerged into the world of time in the story, I feel that I have been deeply impacted as time travels super fast while reading this book because of how emerged I get when reading it. I know for a fact that other readers feel the same way. For me, I have spent 4 hours so far reading over this 1st chapter and drawing what I believe the characters and world looks like. I have also ordered a custom bed spread from Etsy with my drawing on it. 5 stars any day.

Very fun read! can't wait for more. The characters were very interesting and I cant wait to see how they will develop over the chapters. [img=recommend]

Great story so far. Excellent storytelling. I was hooked from the first paragraph. I liked the suspense and mystery. The author did an amazing job of giving vivid descriptions. I've already added the book to my library and looking forward to reading the rest of the story.