Has great potential, but alas, soon into the story there's a possible trigger for many. So here's a warning for those whom personally find such things to be nauseating. In chapter 6 MC is imprinted with a guardian seal by Mito. What's a guardian seal you might ask? A slave seal that enslaves him at the whimsy of the Uzumaki clan, or rather Kushina in specific. What's even worse is that the MC has had his suspicions months ago (in-story time) but still willingly paved the path to this event. Willingly paved the path to his own servitude. Power is meaningless if in the end of the day you're just a slave. If you don't mind this particular caveat then this is actually a rather unique story. The author's writing style in particular is engaging.

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Although several things are not canon, it is interesting so far. And I understand perfectly the decisions that the MC is making, they are intelligent. Even so, I hope that the MC will not be restricted by others, although restricting itself gives it some advantages. [img=recomendar] I hope relationships develop like your other Avatar FF, it's awesome.

It was going great before he was made a slave and branded, so i give it a three as the writing is pretty good as are updates....................

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Honestly, I missed a lot of monologues in each chapter, especially in the battle and politics chapters. I originally came to read this book to see the MC's romance, but it seems I read the wrong book. The plot goes a bit slow and the character development is made too real as if the author doesn't want someone to complain about the romance too soon. But hey after reading 80 chapters, I felt like it was a waste of time because the romance was only in a few chapters. And I felt nauseous looking at the very long monologues with trite dialog that didn't really entertain me. I regret reading this, and I'm confused why people love this book. Because of the action chapters? Because of the political chapters? Wow your taste is really mature or maybe I'm too childish to understand this book.

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I had high expectations after reading quest maker, but this novel just seems a bad copy of it. I couldn’t even continue reading it after the mc, who at that time was a 4 year old kid, was perfectly fine with being manipulated by the Uzumaki clan into becoming a slave and having his mind altered.

Thoroughly enjoying the novel, has the right amount of sweet system progress, good characterization and dialogue. I like the mc and can't wait to read more.