Has great potential, but alas, soon into the story there's a possible trigger for many. So here's a warning for those whom personally find such things to be nauseating. In chapter 6 MC is imprinted with a guardian seal by Mito. What's a guardian seal you might ask? A slave seal that enslaves him at the whimsy of the Uzumaki clan, or rather Kushina in specific. What's even worse is that the MC has had his suspicions months ago (in-story time) but still willingly paved the path to this event. Willingly paved the path to his own servitude. Power is meaningless if in the end of the day you're just a slave. If you don't mind this particular caveat then this is actually a rather unique story. The author's writing style in particular is engaging.

Truely good story like the rest of Fanharem's work. One of the few authors that continously puts out good stuff. If you've read Jordinio's naruto story then you'll already know how the system works, for those that haven't, it's all about the grind. lol The story is set just before the second shinobi war and the MC is five years old. As alot happens in the war expect the first 60ish chapters to take place during this time period as the MC will be a kid, no lemons for you, yet. The author takes a more realistic view of the world and therefore what would happen in a war (I've already seen one review where they whine about 'everybody is r*ping') so if that's too much for you, sorry. But I will state that none of it is described or 'on screen' but heavily implied and discussed by characters. The world if filling out well, but the only gripe I have is that the MC has no real motivation outside of the harem, everything is for the harem, which is eternal. *Slightly spoilery* As to the supposed *slave seal*, the seal that the MC is given by a clan head is to basically insure that the MC doesn't kill or cause irreparable harm to the clan hier, who is the MC's charge. It's explicitly stated that all the seal does is keep the MC from thinking or acting maliciously agains the clan heir (who is the MC's friend). How that equals a slave seal to others, I'm not sure. The clan head requests the seal as they've only know the MC for a few weeks, at best, and they want a little bit of insurance while they try to make ties with the MC and their clan. The MC accepts as they will be rewarded with a ton of multiple clans secret techniques by the system and the MC knows that the seal doesn't cause any major restrictions and they could get out of it if desired. Which proves true as the seal is removed pretty early on. I write this as the number one review gives inaccurate and incomplete statements about the seal and I'd rather not see a reader that may enjoy this turn away because of false impressions. Really the seal is a non-issue and is almost forgotten until it's brought up again upon it's removal, it has zero impact on the story or character development.

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Although several things are not canon, it is interesting so far. And I understand perfectly the decisions that the MC is making, they are intelligent. Even so, I hope that the MC will not be restricted by others, although restricting itself gives it some advantages. [img=recomendar] I hope relationships develop like your other Avatar FF, it's awesome.

It was going great before he was made a slave and branded, so i give it a three as the writing is pretty good as are updates....................

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I had high expectations after reading quest maker, but this novel just seems a bad copy of it. I couldn’t even continue reading it after the mc, who at that time was a 4 year old kid, was perfectly fine with being manipulated by the Uzumaki clan into becoming a slave and having his mind altered.

Thoroughly enjoying the novel, has the right amount of sweet system progress, good characterization and dialogue. I like the mc and can't wait to read more.