Shame about the harem tag. I have a policy that i will never give any powerstones to a harem story on principle. Its pretty good so far though so i will give you a glowing review. But ya no powerstones sry.

write after read a three chapter and this enough to give 5 star                                                                                      

The Mc is really an idiot, I mean sure I read some part but even after 10 chapters Mc will always do something dumb. And the plot feels so forced and illogical. I will keep reading but I know it won’t be long till I stop.

I like the way the story goes. The only strange thing is that they can control metalbending after only a few weeks when it is supposed to be extremely difficult and that is why there are not many metalbending, but an interesting story so far.

To be completely honest this ff was a complete disappointment. I had read his other ff, the mha one, and expected this avatar fanfic to be as good as the mha one or even better. But when I read it, it felt as if I was reading the writing of another author. Anyways let's move onto the bad of this novel. 1. The writing is simply like mtl, it's pretty hard to read and enjoy it. There's many problems with the grammar and this is just the first couple of chapters. 2. The author made the Mc and haru fuse souls but it just feels like Mike doesn't even exist in the story. It just feels like you handed haru the knowledge of avatar and a system. 3. The Mc is incredibly stupid, he literally antagonised a fire nation tax collector when he knew that they wouldn't even attempt at defending him. They would just torture him and haul him off to prison. 3. His personality contradicts itself. Basically he says he doesn't care about his mother and then when he leaves he's suddenly crying? There's also the bs part of him antagonizing the tax collector. Out of knowhere he got angry and punched him. Bruh. These are the main points that I found that disappointed me greatly. I got shocked when I read this. I couldn't believe that this is the same author who wrote the mha ff that I enjoyed dearly. Overall I'd give it 3 stars at most. It's not bad, but it's not good either.

I liked your other work, but I gotta say this fic feels like it was written by someone who does not like the Avatar. Lots of little mistakes about lore. And casual disrespect for the fighting styles. Also it seems like the author will treat the spiritual side as a number instead of getting into it. The character seems to hold an idiot ball at times too. And was naive in places where he did not need to be.

The beginning starts off okay and is enjoyable. However, around chapter 9 or 10 it gets worse. Give it a try if you want but this story is not for me.

Strange why did this novel diffent from author usual style.Most of author novel are my favorite i have read vbut why did this novel bad. it look like another person writing. Spoiler... This novel mc is really poisonous with choice.Most of those choice are really suffocating. and mc is another ozai.

Honestly this is really good especially the writing quality if you compare this to avatar shadow of gambler the writing quality is much better