To be completely honest this ff was a complete disappointment. I had read his other ff, the mha one, and expected this avatar fanfic to be as good as the mha one or even better. But when I read it, it felt as if I was reading the writing of another author. Anyways let's move onto the bad of this novel. 1. The writing is simply like mtl, it's pretty hard to read and enjoy it. There's many problems with the grammar and this is just the first couple of chapters. 2. The author made the Mc and haru fuse souls but it just feels like Mike doesn't even exist in the story. It just feels like you handed haru the knowledge of avatar and a system. 3. The Mc is incredibly stupid, he literally antagonised a fire nation tax collector when he knew that they wouldn't even attempt at defending him. They would just torture him and haul him off to prison. 3. His personality contradicts itself. Basically he says he doesn't care about his mother and then when he leaves he's suddenly crying? There's also the bs part of him antagonizing the tax collector. Out of knowhere he got angry and punched him. Bruh. These are the main points that I found that disappointed me greatly. I got shocked when I read this. I couldn't believe that this is the same author who wrote the mha ff that I enjoyed dearly. Overall I'd give it 3 stars at most. It's not bad, but it's not good either.
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It gets worse too, he never fails to make questionable choices whenever he can and the skill system absolutely sucks crackhead äss. I still can't understand why does every little move of an earth bending has to be a seperate skill that needs to be put points in, like lift a rock, make it fly and make it dense is all a seperate skill on its own. Then the question of why would he ever focus so much on making flying swords like a wuxia character.
Author died and a Chinese clown took over his body 😞
Whitestair_Ivory:It gets worse too, he never fails to make questionable choices whenever he can and the skill system absolutely sucks crackhead äss. I still can't understand why does every little move of an earth bending has to be a seperate skill that needs to be put points in, like lift a rock, make it fly and make it dense is all a seperate skill on its own. Then the question of why would he ever focus so much on making flying swords like a wuxia character.
All of the sudden everything make sense
MagnuS:Author died and a Chinese clown took over his body 😞
MagnuS:Author died and a Chinese clown took over his body 😞
