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Fushii
FushiiLv12yr
2022-04-28 01:54

The story overall is good. The only downside is the writing. It is a translation but there are so many wierd spelling errors that disrupts the reading flow and sometimes you need to reread the sentence but still don't understand it. There are also chinese names in the fanfic, you should read the chapter for spelling errors and wierd sentences so us readers don't need to be tortured by it. But overall the story is good.

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Tsuki_Rin
Tsuki_RinLv4

do you know the real title for the mtl?

Incognito3200
Incognito3200Lv2

Uhhh I didn't read but if his little brother are shishui then this chines fan fic is grabage shet no offense but it's really bad

Gh0st00
Gh0st00Lv15

and you know the author ain't never going to put no effort into edit any of it

LORD_sKY
LORD_sKYLv1

Check out Naruto: Time Manipulation yes I'm the author and I have no shame in promoting it

Lc_The_Second
Lc_The_SecondLv4

Why would you promote something that has been abandoned?

LORD_sKY: Check out Naruto: Time Manipulation yes I'm the author and I have no shame in promoting it
JustAReader3
JustAReader3Lv4

if it has Chinese name then this is just another MTL sigh

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