where there is Aizen I am there, because I want to know what author will do with such a charater. .. .😂hahahahahahahahahahaahahaahahahahahahahaah

The story overall is good. The only downside is the writing. It is a translation but there are so many wierd spelling errors that disrupts the reading flow and sometimes you need to reread the sentence but still don't understand it. There are also chinese names in the fanfic, you should read the chapter for spelling errors and wierd sentences so us readers don't need to be tortured by it. But overall the story is good.

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Aïe, aïe. It's seem that I'm not the only author who have bad comments. I know how it's difficult to write. You've all of my support author. The story is nice. Continuous like that 👌

the writing quality is very bad, but a little better than most MTL novels. thats probably my biggest complaint, other than that its the fact that he changes identities and goes more into politics and boring things. i was kinda hoping for a missing nin perspective but he just goes to another village

Grammar.... pronouns.... lastly, story building.... all lack proper construction. You also neglected to remove several eastern references, "sayings," to give the book more traction away from a translation format.

Will it be continued? Cuz you haven't uploaded a long time

I think this is a pretty interesting story, it's very rare to see an MC who is not close to the original MC from the world itself, because what I often see is only an MC who always sticks to the MC

Good translation keep up the good work😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻