I don’t have a lot of experience with this roommates genre, but I do consider myself well-versed in urban and therefore my review might be subjective but here I go. I love the concept and I believe it has a lot of potential for growth, two people have a career and they happen to coincide. It also has immense potential for comedy, I can recall an scenario like nisekoi’s where they had to lie their way through the public image to fool their families or something like hunger games, my type of writing is about problem-solving rather than no difficulties at all, I don’t know how you plan to tackle this plot but I can already see scenarios where they have to choose between their own relationship and the progress of their career, perhaps taking roundabouts to stay together, some other male and female romantic interests appear to make things more difficult but they stick to each other, so on and so forth, I’d definitely read that. The key is to constantly create third parties and elements that can be used later in the story. The way you write, I’m truly baffled (grammar) it’s as if you were born English or American, it’s truly polished and I don’t think you will have issues there. With all things said I give you full stars and only suggest you add some more background for the characters if you haven’ done so yet, I’ll add to library to read once you have a few more chaps, don’t want to be stuck xD Best of Lucks and hope you succeed.
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Thank you so much for this review! I really appreciate the feedback. I will do my best to adjust my story continuously through the grueling editing process lol and for sure, conflict is needed too. I'm getting caught up in writing the romance arc and so focused less on conflict so far, but will certainly work on that! Thanks again!
