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2023-06-16 22:33

This was a good story but there is much room for improvement. The author's nationality bias taints the story quite heavily, many complained about it but they are a very good translator so if they are amenable to edits that improve readability then I hope they find someone soon willing to rewrite parts starting from the beginning. Also I really hope they find a way to keep translating what's available elsewhere because I want to have this story finish but I don't really like the idea of reading the original text in untranslated form with vastly different character names. I don't even have a link provided by the author for the original text online to continue the story so whatever has halted progress I hope they find a way to resolve the problem so new chapters can be translated.

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