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2023-12-26 19:31

Interesting !!!!! In Novel Ending Is Bit Rushed And Confusing But Otherthings Are Good..😍😍 I Love If There Are More Intimate Moment Of Xixi And Shen They Are Cute...🤭🤭

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== impression after 40 chapters == A doctor transmigrate into a novel as a supporting character, Yan Xi. Yan Xi is in a marriage with Gu Shen, a cripple man. Yan Xi doesn't treat Gu Shen with respect and would berate and embarrass him publicly. The transmigrator knows that Yan Xi will die in the novel after divorcing the male lead. She takes over the body right before asking for the divorce in the original novel, so instead of divorcing, she tries to make up for the old mistakes of Yan Xi. (All of this makes up the first set of chapters. While the rest is seeing the transmigrated Yan Xi set forth in her plan of helping Gu Chen and improving her image) The believability of the novel and set up is commendable. Yan Xi is still flawed (old and new). She has to fix the past mistakes that the previous Yan Xi has made. Even though she's a doctor, she doesn't on the spot have a cure and plan in motion to cure this long term disability that the male lead has. She gets some face slapping in by herself but she gets slapped as well. Yan Xi also knows how to use her charms to get the help of the male lead. The progression of the story moves in a smooth way. The male lead, Gu Chen, is still suspicious of Yan Xi as her change is too sudden. Though he is still cautious, he can't help but give Yan Xi attention and help her when she needs it. He proves it that though he is wheelchair bound, he is strong willed to succeed in the business world. Gu Chen won't let anyone bully Yan Xi unless it is him. I really enjoy this even with the cliche tropes: wheelchair bound male lead, transmigration, horrible female lead personality that gets changed, etc. The writer took these ideas and made it into their own story. I'll look forward to the rest of this when it gets picked up!

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