The writing quality in grammar is good. The world building is good. I'm 25 chapters in and I have high hopes for this story so far. The female lead is smart and scheming but she's not a bad person. she doesn't actively seek out to destroy or manipulate people she just mostly wants to live a good life and she's trying to fix the mistakes the previous host has made in order for her life to go more smoothly. The male lead seems to have a cold CEO persona but he doesn't treat the female lead badly at all in spite of all of the hosts previous actions, he's actually quite respectful of her considering. And the author introduces us to his gentle side very quickly. although he is suspicious of the female lead in a change the author lets us see that there is already great potential for him to easily fall deeply in love with her and also lets us see that he is open to romance And isn't the kind of person who would torture the female lead or force himself on the female lead in any way. The female leads family is a great foil. they're the stereotypical abusive rich family and I'm going to enjoy seeing their faces get slapped. I'm also looking forward to possibly seeing the male leads families faces get slapped. It makes me wonder if the female lead in this story, not our female lead but the female lead of the book the star of our story transmigrates into It's going to end up being the main villain of our story lol
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