There are too many many grammar errors.I understand that english isnt author’s first language but it is what it is. Author continuously messes up cultivation levels,talent grades,ranks and levels.For example; top grade speed talent becomes low grade in another chapter. I dont understand how Author can mess these up even though he show stats twice in a chapter.(This was the biggest turn off for me.I cant stand authors forgeting mc’s upgrades than spending couple chapters to get his upgrades again .) author can not do siple math. Story,characters,diaolouge,actions are very dry almost doesnt exist at all. I hope author learn from these mistakes and grow to be a better writer. Author dont be discouraged because of what i wrote.Writing your first story can be tough but you have courage to do that and i admire you for that.
Liked by 14 people
LIKEHave you read divine replication system. Tried to find a good translation, but theyre all money. To read all chapters is $50
sfkq:i know this is 3 months old but this novel is a copy of another book called "Divine Replicating System" the plot is the same and even the story is identical but only the character names are changed