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Dao_of_infinityLv152yr
2022-02-03 12:31

It is a good read, there are spoilers from the comic so be warned those who have not read it yet, in the first and second chapter mind you.[img=exp]

Invincible's: SUPERMAN

Thomas_Hodge
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WM_Dizy
WM_DizyLv15

The grammer is unreadable and the dialogue feels unnatural. SkipSkipSkipSkipSkipSkipSkipSkupSkupllllllll lijkt of you hij of hoog got got got go go ok go go go oh hi

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skulputulurubug
skulputulurubugLv14

the dialogue is super fast it doesn't describe much just proceeds to conversation and something will happen and there are no spaces almost with the pacing, then superman is not a Kryptonian in the fic he's more of a sun sucking alien who has battery issues, after fighting he needs to recharge like phones...

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Megamind2
Megamind2Lv11

it is a good story with huge potential but ppl will back me on this it is too fast paced ridled with spelling errors and plot holes. if those things weren't there it would be a perfect 5

2yr
LastGod
LastGodLv4

This is a really good premise. The way you wrote it is almost like a script but even less. It's just a bunch of dialogue. Because it is just a bunch of dialogue it moves at lightning speed. Sadly there are also some mistakes. And because it's just a bunch of dialogue the mistakes really hurt the story. Grammar mistakes in a novel really don't affect it unless you're unintelligible. Here. However because it's basically just dialogue it really hurts the story when u make even a tiny mistake.

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DarkDemon_KING
DarkDemon_KINGLv14

it was a good read thanks for your work

4mth
Thomas_Hodge
Thomas_HodgeAuthor

I look forward to hearing feed back on the story guys I've got a long one for ya, also stay on the look out for future stories including series from bleach, one piece, naruto, x-men evolution, the batman comics and more.

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