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ampihamioj
ampihamiojLv22yr
2022-01-31 00:21

The story moves at a fairly decent pace, it doesn't feel like things stop for too long in one place unnecessarily. Chapters are a nice and conveniently short length to read. Development of characters feels fine, with their backgrounds and motivations stated to us as the reader.

Oh My Demon Lord

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4.6
6 Chs

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Cynical_Stranger
Cynical_StrangerLv2

First things first, you have lots of grammar mistakes. Maybe try to use Grammarly to fix those. Secondly, you have things that don't make sense here and there. Keep writing and improving!

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BlueSapphire_dust
BlueSapphire_dustLv3

You have an intersting plot. I am not really into fantasy side of stories, but I would like to give this story a try. Keep up the great work!

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N_webnovel
N_webnovelLv2

Intersting plot so far. The name of the book is indeed super interesting and the starting of the book was also, like to force the readers to read more i.e really appreciative. Keep up the good work dear author!🤓

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Wishful_thinker1
Wishful_thinker1Lv10

The story development is very good and the writing quality is not bad either. I like the characters and I can tell this story has a great potential. Nice work.

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alienfrommars
alienfrommarsLv13

Only five chapters out and I can't really tell anything much about the story. The story is readable, very simple, and easy to understand. I mean, I am not a picky reader as long as I understand it. There are so many commas, though. Thing is, even though the writing is good, the transition of scenes is too abrupt. There were expositions that are there when not needed, but then, things happen just for the heck of it. Hence, it feels forced, too sudden, and confusing. Overall, I think it has an interesting premise. Good luck, author!

2yr
OneClaudia
OneClaudiaLv2

The plot is great, the writing is okay and the characters are good. Only a few chapters released so i can't really say much but so far so good.

2yr
MaxPower12
MaxPower12Lv1

Not really the kind of novel I would read normally but it is still not bad. Just try to fix the grammar errors while editing your book. 4 may be too generous but I feel good today so why not.

2yr
DyaAran
DyaAranLv12

This story was like an interesting roller coaster ride for me. I LOVED IT! I liked where the story started. Within a few minutes, things changed and the new set-up felt a lot more interesting. The writing quality is good. Also, the story is narrated attractively. The choice of vocabulary is great as well. I would say this story is written with good writing quality, interesting development and strong world background. ​ The characters are super attractive. I've liked the characters and the way they were introduced and described. Overall it was an interesting read for me. I've added this book to my library and will keep reading. Dear author, you're talented and capable of writing riveting stories. Keep up the good work! I wish you the best of luck!

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KAREN_DN
KAREN_DNLv11

WOW! the opening is very good! oh, one thing for sure. when I read the synopsis, I know the story will be interesting. and when I read from chapter 1, my instinct is true! well done, author. keep in writing. can't wait for the more chapters^^

2yr
LordHermes
LordHermesLv2

I would strongly recommend people keep a close watch on this story. It has the potential to become the next big story. To have a story being written at the same time as this worries me a little about my work. I am glad you are working hard on this! Keep up the good work!

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