Oh My Demon Lord

First things first, you have lots of grammar mistakes. Maybe try to use Grammarly to fix those. Secondly, you have things that don't make sense here and there. Keep writing and improving!

You have an intersting plot. I am not really into fantasy side of stories, but I would like to give this story a try. Keep up the great work!

Intersting plot so far. The name of the book is indeed super interesting and the starting of the book was also, like to force the readers to read more i.e really appreciative. Keep up the good work dear author!🤓

The story development is very good and the writing quality is not bad either. I like the characters and I can tell this story has a great potential. Nice work.

Only five chapters out and I can't really tell anything much about the story. The story is readable, very simple, and easy to understand. I mean, I am not a picky reader as long as I understand it. There are so many commas, though. Thing is, even though the writing is good, the transition of scenes is too abrupt. There were expositions that are there when not needed, but then, things happen just for the heck of it. Hence, it feels forced, too sudden, and confusing. Overall, I think it has an interesting premise. Good luck, author!

The plot is great, the writing is okay and the characters are good. Only a few chapters released so i can't really say much but so far so good.

Not really the kind of novel I would read normally but it is still not bad. Just try to fix the grammar errors while editing your book. 4 may be too generous but I feel good today so why not.

This story was like an interesting roller coaster ride for me. I LOVED IT! I liked where the story started. Within a few minutes, things changed and the new set-up felt a lot more interesting. The writing quality is good. Also, the story is narrated attractively. The choice of vocabulary is great as well. I would say this story is written with good writing quality, interesting development and strong world background. ​ The characters are super attractive. I've liked the characters and the way they were introduced and described. Overall it was an interesting read for me. I've added this book to my library and will keep reading. Dear author, you're talented and capable of writing riveting stories. Keep up the good work! I wish you the best of luck!

WOW! the opening is very good! oh, one thing for sure. when I read the synopsis, I know the story will be interesting. and when I read from chapter 1, my instinct is true! well done, author. keep in writing. can't wait for the more chapters^^

I would strongly recommend people keep a close watch on this story. It has the potential to become the next big story. To have a story being written at the same time as this worries me a little about my work. I am glad you are working hard on this! Keep up the good work!

the start is good, the writing quality is decent. the world scene is subtly presented. the work has potential. this is interesting. i don't have any negative review with the story yet. keep up the good work :)

I'll give you five stars. You have a good plot and the sypnosis was very interesting. Great work you're doing and keep it up dear author 💖 💖

The story moves at a fairly decent pace, it doesn't feel like things stop for too long in one place unnecessarily. Chapters are a nice and conveniently short length to read. Development of characters feels fine, with their backgrounds and motivations stated to us as the reader.

this is my bread and butter when It it comes to novels these are the ones I read most. writing quality and character build are both amazing. keep it up author

Definitely an interesting story premise, not enough there at the moment of writing to say too much about things such as world design. One personal complaint would be that the grammar of the story could be improved. It felt like some sentences went on too long without pause for example, however that's something that I'm sure will improve over time. I'll check back once there's more chapters released to see how it's doing.

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Really waiting for the next chapter, please update soon love the plot and the character design of this novel there is a lot of potential in this novel .keep it upAuthor !!! This is such a beautiful story hope to see more updates from you.[img=recommend] Don't mind the GIf this is promising work will support this novel till the end

I'm surely waiting for more chapters. Transmigration story is always exciting but what makes this story different is the way it is written. It's smooth to read and the character building are great.

Interesting! The synopsis itself was way too exciting! Plot was really well defined and when I was reading I feel like I was inside the book and can see what was happening. Great job author! Keep it up!

The book is great with a decent storyline, the writing made the word became clear. The author portrays the characters really good too. The synopsis was kinda short but it is fine.